Eh, Ironhide actually strikes me as fairly conservative. And any form of xenophilia/interspecies relationships is kind of liberal/radical. I think it's outside of his comfort range.
I like this just the way it is, but I'm curious as to how it will be tweaked.
Where he wouldn't have to feel asphalt beneath his tires and be conscious always of the slight weight that he no longer carried. ^ is my favourite line
^_^ The P/J stuff crept in because I had this sudden image of Prowl with Jazz sitting on his lap, teasing him until Jazz screams. Prowl as dominant is fun.
I'm with robin99 - curious as to the tweaking since it seems perfect just as is, but...I know better. Somehow, if you do tweak it, you'll make it better.
But it really was wonderful and sad and beautiful.
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Interesting drabble.
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Where he wouldn't have to feel asphalt beneath his tires and be conscious always of the slight weight that he no longer carried.
^ is my favourite line
Ah, P/J always sneak in with the screaming...
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But it really was wonderful and sad and beautiful.
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