poem; hot air

Nov 16, 2008 22:14

Depression and procrastination leads to random poetry, apparently. also don't forget my last post was for drabble requests, in case you haven't asked for one

Hot AirShe was a like balloon ( Read more... )

hot air, poetry, poems

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hydroskufl November 17 2008, 04:19:55 UTC
this poem makes me kind of sad. ): i don't know, I just feel a lot from it dsadfghasd

♥♥♥ I hope you feel better! ♥♥♥

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sakanda November 17 2008, 04:28:16 UTC
I am sorry I made you sad! xD But I'm flattered that I made you feel anything...? ♥

I am better! I cleaned my room & such, so yeah~ ♥

Thank you for caring, love. I'm going to watch Ikoku Irokoi Romantan now haha.

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nillabunny November 17 2008, 22:07:22 UTC
That is a depressing poem...but beautiful!

You and your poetry when you're depressed. And I seriously don't get how cleaning your room up is supposed to make you feel better. Cleaning my room always puts me in a bad mood and makes me freak out at Alicia.

Just in case you're still depressed, here.
I loooves you <33333333 (in a platonic manner and such)

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sakanda November 23 2008, 03:46:25 UTC
OH YHEY I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THE POEEEEM SQEEEEEE

and wtf. Cause I'm a girl. I like my house and room blah blah whatever to be clean around me. If it's all gross I feel gross and like bad about myself or something. I don't know. It's a thing I got from my mom. Plus you're just weird

YOU'RE SITTING RIGHT NEXT TO MEEEEEEEE

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nillabunny November 23 2008, 03:50:18 UTC
I know, it was fabulous!

Well, when it's all finished I maybe feel better after I have cooled down a bit. But the whole two day cleaning process (yeah, our room gets super messy before I decide to clean it, and then we go really slow because we pause to look at, like, everything we find) makes me feel all hot and short-tempered and irritable.

AND I KNOW I AM!!!! I STILL AM RIGHT NOOOOW!!

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sakanda November 23 2008, 03:52:22 UTC
SHORT-TEMPEREDDDDD.

OMG YOU AREEE well more half reclining.

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colleenismagic November 23 2008, 06:05:56 UTC
This is really really severely amazing. You are my favorite writer!

I love love that this is so completely metaphorical, like it never says "And she performs self-destructive behaviors" ahha but you can just get what she's really going through from the metaphor.

THAT MAKES NO SENSE BUT AHHH I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU

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Brandt anonymous November 25 2008, 04:03:17 UTC
o_O
This one's interesting. Seems like it could mean a lot of things. It's nice. :3

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