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Doc Chicago: Chapter #13

Dec 22, 2013 18:10

Title: Doc Chicago
Author: sajaal
Rating: G to R (just in case)
Characters: Dr. Reid Oliver, Luke Snyder, Holden Snyder, Aaron Snyder, Dr. Bob Hughes, Katie Snyder and a myriad of atwt and original characters
Disclaimer: Not mine, and I really mean no harm and all mistakes are mine.

A/N: This is partly AU and partly not. I have to thank ( Read more... )

dr. reid oliver, !author|artist: sajaal, luke snyder, fanfiction, lure

Comments 25

scotianova December 23 2013, 01:06:12 UTC

http://data3.whicdn.com/images/22511307/Agim-Kaba38329_thumb.jpg

Look and him :)

I like your version very much!

sajaal December 24 2013, 00:30:14 UTC

Oh yeah, there is just something about that guy's lips...amazingly sensuous....this could be Bill, if it was I have no idea why Luke hadn't jumped him before....he's incredibly sexy;-)

Thank you my dear now try and relax and enjoy Christmas with your family <3 <3 <3

amyafa December 23 2013, 08:03:38 UTC

“I don’t think that it would be a good idea for me to assess Mr. Mayer with our history Mr. Snyder. I usually don’t help people who try to blackmail me,” he added coldly and saw Luke wince at his hurtful words and then nod and turn away and head back to Casey and Aaron.

Ah poor Luke. With the word Reid chose he will fill even more guilty and responsible that Reid does not want to help.

And this was Reid trying to take the hunted look out of Luke his eyes.

He has a lot to learn.

I hope he listened to Aaron but he should have realised by know that there is more to Luke than just that blackmail attempt.

I hope skinny Luke is not a bad omen. I do not want Like to become ill.

But it might force Reid to take care of Luke witch is becoming necessary before Luke can see him as a good man.

Darn could he not at least take the apologies.

I know you will help him fix this mess. Good luck.

And good luck with your Yule story.

sajaal December 24 2013, 00:36:17 UTC

Unfortunately we know what kind of ass Reid can be and how instead of showing how he really feels he needs to throw it back at Luke...Reid knows he's attracted to Luke and that makes him angry more with himself than Reid but of course it ends up he takes it out on Luke. Luke will be fine but he will need some attention from a doctor just not medical attention:-))

You are absolutely correct all will be fixed...I promise so hang in there!!!

Thanks so much you for reading and your wonderful comments...now go enjoy your holiday!!!

parishs December 23 2013, 09:26:39 UTC

ah,thanks! Nice that you had time to post another chapter.
Luke being so desperate is hard to digest though..

Have a happy Xmas!

sajaal December 24 2013, 00:40:07 UTC

It's hard to write Luke like this sometimes, but during so much of our interactions with him he was in this state of mind and I hated it he was such a good guy and let himself be pushed around too much. He will grow that backbone I promise and show Reid who he really is....Reid is already physically attracted to Luke so when Luke finally turns on the charm he won't be able to resist:-))

Thank you so much for reading and commenting:-)

Enjoy your Xmas too!!!

parishs December 24 2013, 08:43:24 UTC

thanks! and re-reading it, a nice devilish image comes to mind: Reid and Aaron together! Wow. I Always liked Aaron, or at least the guy who played Aaron. Hm.Reiron is born, LOL.

sajaal December 25 2013, 03:44:45 UTC

You are completely incorrigible...Reiron....OMG...now have a great tomorrow and enjoy time with whomever you hang out with.

Thanks so much for reading and re-reading and commenting and I so agree the actor who played Aaron was/is hot!!!

fremi08 December 23 2013, 11:48:43 UTC

I'm glad Aaron explained things a little to Reid so he can understand better where Luke is coming from.
Now Reid can take it to heart and find out who and what Luke really is.

Thanks for the chapter and good luck with your Yule-story! I'm already looking forward to it!

Wish you a very merry Christmas!!

sajaal December 24 2013, 00:44:15 UTC

Luke needed a champion for himself and this time he has two Casey and Aaron they will make sure to set things on the right course and then Luke can show Reid who he really is and then well we'll see what happens:-))

The Yule-story is actually three separate stories kind of like the three gifts...challenge is for everyone to see if you can find the gold, frankincense and myrrh in each one:-))

Thanks so much for reading and commenting as well a very Merry Christmas to you as well!!!!

estelle18 December 23 2013, 12:20:06 UTC

Thank you so much for just another chapter I'm glad that Aaron talked to Reid about Luke , so that he can find out how Luke really is.
I wish you a very happy Xmas and I'm looking forward to your Yule-story.

sajaal December 24 2013, 00:47:32 UTC

You are so very welcome and Aaron needed to set Reid straight and not treat Luke like crap, Luke's had more than enough of that with Noah. Luke needed to do this last thing for Noah and now that he's tried he can leave it and move forward and yeah show Reid who he really is.

A very Merry Xmas to you too and I hope you enjoy my Yule-stories, three in total that show three different Christmas's with the characters from three of my stories...that you don't need to read to understand so enjoy them:-))