Lipstick Smudges (Challenge #14 Taste) (PG)

Jun 23, 2008 16:55


Title: Lipstick Smudges

Author: Clorinda

Summary: Three men and a secret. Implied slash.

Warnings: NONE

Spoilers: NONE

Prompt: Taste (#14)

Time taken: 4-6 minutes

Notes: Concrit appreciated a lot. My writing hand feels seriously rusty after a SERIOUSLY long hiatus

Lipstick Smudges

By Clorinda

Three men and a secret. Implied slash.

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purpleicicles June 23 2008, 13:41:22 UTC
That is a fantastic last line - you're not in the least bit rusty!

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valkyrie_child June 27 2008, 11:35:30 UTC
That's a really good relief, but it didn't really cater to the prompt 100%, which is why I was a little miffed. But thank you!!1

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cornerofmadness June 23 2008, 19:00:31 UTC
ooo nice last line, nice descriptions all around

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valkyrie_child June 27 2008, 11:36:27 UTC
Thanks!! Since it was a perception-based prompt, I kind of jumbled taste with touch.

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