Comments | saiyuki_time: Aromatherapy, Challenge #11, PG

despina_moon in saiyuki_time

Aromatherapy, Challenge #11, PG

May 31, 2008 10:37

Title: Aromatherapy
Author: Despina_moon
Warnings: PG (Not really, more like G, but I resist.)
Pairing(s): none, really
Summary: Goku reflects.
Notes: Challenge #11 - Smell. 23 minutes, 5 editing. Words: 517. As usual, I ran out of time.

( Aromatherapy )

char:goku, author:despina_moon, challenge: smell, rating:g

Comments 23

priestess_grrrl May 31 2008, 18:00:35 UTC

Wow, I totally loved this! What an awesome sensory experience. I could just imagine how each one of them smells. I loved this line so much: The scent made Goku's heart kind of ache, even when Gojyo was hogging all the spring rolls. Awww, so bittersweet! And then Goku preferred Sanzo's angry scent to every other aroma in the world. Loved that. It's so... them. Yes. This was just beautiful! ^_^

despina_moon June 3 2008, 03:59:28 UTC

Thank you for your wonderful comment!

I was lucky this week, the story wrote itself.

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despina_moon June 3 2008, 04:04:06 UTC

Thank you, I'm very glad you liked it.

ginnyvos May 31 2008, 19:58:40 UTC

This... was wonderful Seriously wonderful. Loved it :)

despina_moon June 3 2008, 04:05:50 UTC

Thank you, I'm very happy you enjoyed it. Goku's fun to write.

catinabowl June 1 2008, 04:29:47 UTC

I like the line about Goyjo smelling like a dog waiting for a kick. Poor kappa, so true.

despina_moon June 3 2008, 04:08:56 UTC

To me, because of his upbringing, Gojyo always seemed afraid of rejection. He's a tragic boy (as are they all.)

Thanks!

white_cross_b June 1 2008, 05:15:46 UTC

This is wonderful! You really pegged each one of them dead on with what their would be.

despina_moon June 3 2008, 04:15:09 UTC

I'm glad I could manage to represent (if only a little) of what they might be like. That is high praise. Thank you.