Comments | saiyuki_time: In Sickness and In Health, Sanzo/Goku-PG

kerumica in saiyuki_time

In Sickness and In Health, Sanzo/Goku-PG

Mar 23, 2008 22:53

Title: In Sickness and In Health
Author: keru_saiyuki
Warnings: worksafe
Pairing(s): Sanzo/Goku
Notes: prompt #1-First time-31 minutes
A/N: Been freaking out about punctuation lately. Please offer guidance/assistance if you see something off. Thanks :)

He lay on stomach, trying to get comfortable. The pain was unbearable at this point. He wanted to ( Read more... )

author:keru_saiyuki, pair:goku/sanzo, challenge:first times

Comments 7

baka_gaijin March 24 2008, 13:08:44 UTC

awwwwwwwww....

~ hugs Goku ~

Very well done! I really love the way you kept Sanzo gruff, but still able to show some concern..

...pulling his young charge closer to him, rubbing small circles on his back...

~ loves ~

kerumica March 24 2008, 14:15:02 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoy it :)

avierra March 24 2008, 14:11:58 UTC

Hehe! The way he eats, one would think that would be more of a problem, it's very true. I think you have a really good grasp of their dynamic at this point in their relationship, where it's much more of a ward/guardian thing.

kerumica March 24 2008, 14:21:34 UTC

I would like to think that he has developed an iron stomach after eating so much. I'm glad you enjoy it and thanks for commenting :)

purpleicicles March 26 2008, 16:46:12 UTC

Sanzo's small way of showing he cares is very striking here, and well contrasted to his gruffness and angry-scared thing. Well done on the characterization!

kerumica March 26 2008, 18:27:45 UTC

Thank you! :D

lillypuff March 26 2008, 20:35:18 UTC

Ah Sanzo, you can't stay mad forever. A lovely little fic, but poor Goku!