Hit - Challenge #25 - Gojyo/? - R

Sep 08, 2008 12:15

Title: Hit
Author: TheToastAlchmst (Toasty).
Rating: R for language.
Warnings: Quite the amount of foul language.
Pairing(s): None.
Notes: Prompt #25: Fight - 35 minutes. I won't give away too much, but this scene was burning a hole in my head, thus explaining why I had to write it. ^__^;

Left, right, dodge, duck, swing. Hit! )

challenge: fight, char:gojyo, author:thetoastalchmst, rating:r

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cornerofmadness September 8 2008, 16:47:44 UTC
wow, just wow. I had never considered that Banri might have been the one to teach Gojyo how to fight. Interesting idea and very well done

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thetoastalchmst September 8 2008, 16:51:50 UTC
Thank you very much! ^__^

Gojyo knew some moves before he met Banri, I imagined (that's why Banri wanted him on his team), but I assume he got stronger by fighting while with Banri as well. Like sparring, maybe? Only extremely violently. XD

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cornerofmadness September 8 2008, 22:03:55 UTC
yes I'm sure Jien taught Gojyo about as much as a young boy could absorb and i can see Banri captilizing on it

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sharpeslass September 8 2008, 23:24:03 UTC
I love your icon... I think jedishampoo could relate to its message. I've heard her screams while she proofreads at work.

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cornerofmadness September 9 2008, 01:38:53 UTC
snort. I make that sound when i look at my own fanfic in rough draft form

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