[Doujinshi] Midnight

[saitoki]

Title:Midnight
Author:Saitoki
Rating: PG-13
Pairings:YamixYuugi
Genre: Romance/humor
Pages:3
Warnings: OOC Yami for humorous reason and cross dressing
Summary: Yami takes advantage of Yuugi in his sleep. Yuugi gets the wrong idea.

Comments

[kiuolo]

WOW! I love this!!

I literally laughed out loud all the way through this! Poor, poor Yami. Yugi really did get the wrong idea, huh? Hahaha. But Yami was right!! That dress really does suit Yugi. He looks adorable in it.

And the two omakes!! I'm a fan of misunderstandings like that, so I was fangirling the whole way through. I want to see Yami in the dress Yugi bought him. xDDD I imagine he'd look very fabulous. And it really was too bad that Yugi wasn't having one of "those kind" of dreams about Yami~ x3

I know I said this last time I commented on your art, but you draw wonderfully! Unfortunately, I don't know much about pigment liners or anything, so I don't know if I can be of help with your question. Sorry. >.< But but but! Whatever you're doing, please keep it doing it! I love all of the little details I always see in your art! Adding all of those little things to the backgrounds must be time consuming, but it looks great! I also like how you do expressions! It's just-yeah. I love it all. =3

[saitoki]

Thanks! Are you the one who comment on the post that I deleted on Yami_no_hikari community? The space and link on that post got messed up beyond fixing so I deleted it, I just noticed the deleted comment later.

Well those gag pages are pretty much for comic practice, I used it to test with pens and tones. My question was pretty much "quality or quantity"(though I pretty much go to the quality side), and I wonder If you notice the degrade of art in page 3, it's all.

Anyway, thank you. It's nice to have people see and comment on my work. As you can see it's kinda lonely here XD

Ah, I tried (and failed) to imagine Yami in that dress XD.It sure would be really weird.

[kiuolo]

Nope, that wasn't me. Sorry! I was just talking about when I commented on your doujinshi cover the other day, you see~

Oh, I understand now! Nope, I didn't really notice the quality changing as I read through the pages. Now that you've pointed it out I can kind of see it, but it's not too bad. I don't think you have to worry much. ^^ Of course, I'm not an artist, so you should probably take my advice with a grain of salt. ^^;;

No problem! Like I said, I really enjoyed this! The least I could do was comment on it! Plus, doujinshi is a weakness of mine. Haha.

Don't you mean weirdly AMAZING? x3 Ahahaha, I'm joking. But seriously, I'm trying to imagine Yami wearing that, I can't stop giggling.

[saitoki]

No problem, I should have checked my email first, the comments are logged there.

Well, that's the good thing too know it wasn't too obvious. And everyone's comment have their own value, not all reader are artist anyway, and I know someone who is not very good at art but gave me many helpful advices, I have to admit i could draw like now is thank to her. :)

[bunnynumber13]

These are awesome! I love your style. Poor sexually frustrated Yami. XD

I wanted him to say so badly: "Dude, I put you in that dress because I was screwing with you."

Also some corrections, because I see several mistakes.

"As a spirit Yami have a lot of free time" should be "As a spirit Yami has a lot of free time."

"So his favorite pass time..." should be "So his favorite past time..."

"But as delighting as it's..." should be "But as delightful as it is..."

There's a few more but those really stuck out to me. Other than that, this was a fun read. :)

[saitoki]

Thank you for pointing those out! I'm always forgetful about the grammar change between first and third person, the others I have to blame my lack of vocabulary >.<, English is not my first language. I have re-read and fixed all the mistake I could find. Again thank you, and please continue to point them out in the future, I really do want to improve :).

About sexually frustrated Yami, it's mostly because many fics tend to have Yuugi admire Yami from afar (not that I deny the guy's sexiness but still)so I wanted to play it backward for once.XD

Now that you pointed that out, I realized that Yami could really play it off as a prank 0.0 (provided that he wasn't panicking first XD)

[bunnynumber13]

It's all right. You'd be surprised at how poorly people who speak English as their first language write it. I'm talking about educated people here too! It's a wonder some of them even passed high school.

With his ability to hold his composure, I'm fairly certain Yami could pull off this as a prank. ;)

[saitoki]

Well, I don't really know about the English speaker, but I have read a lot of badly written English stories. To me, the most intolerable one are as bad as Google Translate or even worse. Though I really wonder why many people get confused between "your" and "you are", "were" and "we are". They are the most commonly spotted mistakes (on the internet anyway), but they have entirely different meanings.

By the way you are the author of "The time thief"? I love that story, your writing is really captivating, it's one of the stories that inspirited me to draw (or try to anyway) an Ancient Egypt doujinshi. I would love to see more of that story.XD

[fantasia0829]

So freaking adorable! XDD

[saitoki]

thanks! Glad you like it XD

[mahayana_na]

HAHAHAHA Those are HILARIOUS. I really like the punchline of the first one, with "Yami's pride". Oh Yuugi, you come to the best conclusions. Great job on these! They made me laugh.

As for the markers, go with the 0.1. I don't notice a huge difference between the first two pages and the last page, so you may as well make your life easier and go with the faster tool. When drawing a big comic project you need to prioritize speed. Otherwise it will take you forever to draw. You can always use the 0.05 on specific details when you need to.

[saitoki]

Thanks. It would be funny if I've made Yuugi imagine Yami went out mind crush people in that...outfit, haha.
Thank you for the advice. I think I will use the 0.1 on stuff that have less detail.the 0.05 is still necessary though :)

[ami_kusanagi]

Wow~ I love it *hug*