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Fic: Wrapped

Nov 13, 2006 22:12

Title: Wrapped
Author: Dria
Rating: Work safe
Summary: The road to hell... late night reflections from Saito.
Author’s Notes: For crazy_squirtle (better late than never ^_~)

( It had been an accident )

Comments 3

arien20 November 14 2006, 00:10:46 UTC

Waaa that was veeeery cute*-*
I love this pair>

innusiq November 14 2006, 07:27:13 UTC

This was a very sweet looking into the inner workings of Takumi's thoughts about Ruito. How can something so wrong be so right? *sigh* Thanks for sharing!

crux_australis November 24 2006, 03:03:25 UTC

1.There had been any number of good intentions once. After all he’d never intended to get himself romantically attached to any of his musical co-stars, never intended to be drawn unwittingly to the youngest of them all and once he’d realised that he was in a mess over that precise problem, he’d intended to get himself out.

2.So this was the point his good intentions had brought him to, this point so close to sleep when everything seemed so incredibly straight forward and natural, a sleeping Ruito in his arms and a breakfast for two and lots of bad jokes about morning breath to look forward to.

3.Not quite right, he corrected himself, an almost sleeping Ruito.

1 + 2 + 3 = Perfect. I loved everything about this; from the flow of the story to the perfect grammar to the...GUH. Everything...just everything blew me away! Kudos!