[30 Saint Seiya Themes] Fanfic - Infractus Mens, Infractus Os

[fenerkulesi]

To those who were expecting a fic like my previous work, sorry to disappoint. This one actually has a plot. Mind, it’s not a very good one, because plots/sequences aren’t my forte. I almost always write introspective pieces where you don’t have to worry about plot, so please don’t hurt me if it needs help

Comments

[fenerkulesi]

You liked it? That's good. You were the person I was halfway expecting a bad review from, because I'm not that familiar with Shaka and I didn't want to make him too out of character. Now I just have to politely ask you not to hurt me if I write a companion/sequel with ShakaxAphrodite. ^_^

[ghaidin]

poor Aphro :(
Is there going to be a second part to this? I'd for one be very glad ;)

[anonymous]

I love this story, hope you will continue with it. Aphrodite lovley, i love him to pieces.:)

[lyra_orpheus]

“Calm down, everything’s going to be all right…” He could hardly believe that this was the same Pisces Saint who, just moments ago, had seemed so calm and in control of his emotions. What could have happened to him…Is this what it’s like to watch someone lose their mind while knowing there’s nothing you can do? In a matter of minutes, the once proud Saint was reduced to a sobbing wreck, clinging to Shaka out of pure need for human contact. Soon, he had worn himself out, and was sleeping heavily. Shaka smiled. Aphrodite was still clinging to him in his sleep, as much as he had when he was awake. I can’t possibly leave him now. He moved Aphrodite over, and lay down next to him. Soon, he too was caught in the calm of sleep.

I found Aphrodite clinging to Shaka a bit cute, he's almost like a lost child. ...Except he's a grown man...and he isn't weak...and I officially find Aphrodite cool thanks to this. :P

[ohtori_akio84]

Great story, dying to read more!