Wings
The hard part about being close to your work and thinking it's good is that it's hard to change. My TA says it's good overall, but structurally, there's not enough gloom, there's not enough reason for Trevor to do what he does at the end of the second act. She wants me to delete the cel phone scene and find a visual way to illustrate enough of a reason to drive him to the event at the end of the second act. I guess the only way is to delete it and sit down and stare at it until something comes.