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[inception fic] Hero Today [2a/7]

Sep 30, 2010 00:18

Title: Hero Today [chapter two]
Author: saintdogstreet
Word count: ~6800 for this chapter
Rating: R
Warnings: Arthur/Eames. Violence, profanity. Unbetaed.
Extra Disclaimer: References to Robert Frost and Bob Dylan.
Summary: For the help_pakistan auction. Arthur is a barista by day and the masked superhero Vindicate by night. Life would be good, if he wasn't hopelessly in love ( Read more... )

inception, help pakistan, fanfiction, arthur/eames

Comments 15

zeto September 30 2010, 10:08:43 UTC

Chapter Two. HELL. YES.

zeto September 30 2010, 10:08:58 UTC

*goes to actually read before making a real comment* :P

zeto September 30 2010, 10:34:58 UTC

Artur has to kill Saito? ;________; The man hasn't even done anything yet~~~

saintdogstreet September 30 2010, 14:40:37 UTC

Yes, it's very eeeevvvviiiillll, isn't it? Muhahaha.

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wirrrn September 30 2010, 17:01:18 UTC

Awesome. Love the flirting between Eames and Arthur. Aluminium, indeed! Plus the superhero stuff was awesome- think I spotted a few allusions to WATCHMEN and THE INCREDIBLES there...

saintdogstreet October 1 2010, 15:26:01 UTC

Oh, yes, lots of Watchmen stuff will probably be cropping up. I was *this* close to having Arthur speak with a certain lack of pronouns and grumbling about filth and growling. Anyways, thanks a lot!

malyntine October 6 2010, 15:04:43 UTC

Firstly, I love your sense of irony (Y). Secondly, omggg that whole introspective bit was amazing. I read a lot of comics, and the dynamics of Arthur's thought process perfectly captures the feel of comic book vigilantes.

saintdogstreet October 7 2010, 14:06:10 UTC

Oh, wow. As a comic book geek myself, I'm so happy to hear you say that. I really worried about getting the comic book. . . feel, the spirit, you know? done right. So, thank you.

malyntine October 18 2010, 11:51:15 UTC

YAAAAY fellow comic book geek! Knew it, only a true comic geek could achieve that kinda feel XD Thanks for the add!

pearljamz October 6 2010, 20:45:32 UTC

sHIT THIS IS LIKE KISS ASS BUT BETTER BECAUSE THERE IS ARTHUR

IN SPANDEX.

saintdogstreet October 7 2010, 14:08:43 UTC

Kick Ass? Awesome. Thank you so much.

zetaori October 8 2010, 08:08:53 UTC

Arthur's daydreaming was so special and lovely.
The banter about tea, ♥ as always.
But the insight into Arthur's background was PURE GOLD. Truly amazing writing.
Also, the faceless legion that controls Arthur's life - very scary and mysterious.

I'm totally hooked. Next part here I come.