Fic: what's in a handshake

[ghaidin]

Title: What's in a handshake
Characters: Shura, tiny bits of Aiolos
Word count: ~ 1700 (sorry..)
Warnings: not fun, not fluffy...wouldn't call it angsty either.

Comments

[scorpioyue]

One lil' question: Isn't it thought instead of though? -> However, the child was too wasted to properly register the thought

His fellow trainee had lost his tongue before loosing his mind and jumping off the cliff.

Oh my... @_@ I really liked the way you told the story. The details helped me to actually see what was going on. Poor Shura. ^^

[ghaidin]

ouch! You're completely right, it should be "thought." Thanks a lot for pointing it out!

And i'm very glad you liked it :D

[scorpioyue]

You're very welcome! And I feel the same about my English. :S

[ghaidin]

Wouldn't it be easier if everybody spoke Spanish? I mean... it didn't take *me* long to learn. And if a stonehead like me can handle it at a young age, it must mean it's really easy! *grin*

[scorpioyue]

You speak with the truth. If only the world could realize this... If only.

^^

[ghaidin]

We're getting there, I think... the Americans will soon realize that their only hope is surrender. Before they realize they'll be translating their national anthem into our beautiful language and then MUAHAHAHA!

Upps. If you're an FBI agent reading this, please ignore it. This is a secret plan to conquer the world and is, well, *secret* ;P

[scorpioyue]

*imagines the world turned upside down* Ahahaha! So funny. ^^

I received your message through my webform thingie. Sure, go ahead! I'll add you to my friends list as well. ^^/