Nice! I have great admiration for people who can write exciting pairing fics. A little thing... Not sure if the tenses are always correct, but then again I do that a lot myself (not my native language either). e.g. And today was one of those afternoons. Maybe it should be 'is' here? But it's just a small thing and doesn't hinder the flow of the story. I love the characterisation of Saga as the passive, 'innocent' one. More twins, I say! :-)
Yay! ^_^/ Thank you for the comment, I'm happy you liked it!
Oops for the "was" instead of "is". ^^;; Just corrected it, thank you for pointing it out. ^_^ I'm actually amazed there weren't more of those, *lol* Specially considering that when I had the idea for the fic and started writing down the main parts of it, half the time Kanon would say "he" talking about Saga, and the other half of the time, "you"! *lol* I ended up settling for "he". ^_^
As for passive innocent Saga, OH YEAH! :D XD :D *lol* I love when he is portrayed that way too, althought depending on the moments, I also love to see uke Kanon. ^_^ They're both perfect for being either uke or seme, I think. They're both perfect period! *lol* Ahh, the twins. ^__^ Must...collect...more...doujinshi. *lol*
^_^ Yay! I'm happy you liked! I plan to write more if the work doesn't kills me before I can get to do it, *lol* (*hates lack of time, too much work and urge to laze around* >>_<<;; *lol*)
Yes, it's pretty much the first. (I wrote 2 or 3 short one-shots set in a semi-original-semi-historical background years ago, but they were really short, and not very great. *lol*)
This is my first Saint Seiya fic, and also first yaoi fic. *lol* ^__^
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A little thing... Not sure if the tenses are always correct, but then again I do that a lot myself (not my native language either).
e.g. And today was one of those afternoons.
Maybe it should be 'is' here?
But it's just a small thing and doesn't hinder the flow of the story.
I love the characterisation of Saga as the passive, 'innocent' one. More twins, I say! :-)
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Oops for the "was" instead of "is". ^^;; Just corrected it, thank you for pointing it out. ^_^
I'm actually amazed there weren't more of those, *lol* Specially considering that when I had the idea for the fic and started writing down the main parts of it, half the time Kanon would say "he" talking about Saga, and the other half of the time, "you"! *lol*
I ended up settling for "he". ^_^
As for passive innocent Saga, OH YEAH! :D XD :D *lol* I love when he is portrayed that way too, althought depending on the moments, I also love to see uke Kanon. ^_^ They're both perfect for being either uke or seme, I think. They're both perfect period! *lol* Ahh, the twins. ^__^
Must...collect...more...doujinshi. *lol*
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I plan to write more if the work doesn't kills me before I can get to do it, *lol* (*hates lack of time, too much work and urge to laze around* >>_<<;; *lol*)
Yes, it's pretty much the first. (I wrote 2 or 3 short one-shots set in a semi-original-semi-historical background years ago, but they were really short, and not very great. *lol*)
This is my first Saint Seiya fic, and also first yaoi fic. *lol* ^__^
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