Fic: birth

[ghaidin]

Title: Birth
Part I: When duty calls...
Part II: the young ones don't listen...
Part III: and that makes strange friends...
Part IV: who turn on each other... **warning**
Part V (plus corollary): until nothing remains. **warning**
Overall word count: ~ 4400
whos/*warnings*: background rambling about the phoenix cloth. Explicit non consensual

Comments

[sagakure]

Ohhh, yummy and promising. *0* *curious about next chapters*

[ghaidin]

*purs* I'm glad it made you curious *goes post*

hope you're feeling better

[undertheice]

OMGYES. Long story, original characters, such a juicy story and background, powerful mind images, lovely descriptions, characters that even without being named caught my attention... OMGILOVEEVERYTHING!

*leaps to the second part*

[ghaidin]

OMGYES. Long story, original characters, such a juicy story and background, powerful mind images, lovely descriptions, characters that even without being named caught my attention...
*goes red* th-th-thank you!

No one gets names in this one, since I'm trying to get around my annoying "name did this. name did that" ... though I'm afraid i still can't manage to write sentences any better than a 9 year old would :(

OMGILOVEEVERYTHING!
*glomps*

[undertheice]

though I'm afraid i still can't manage to write sentences any better than a 9 year old would :(

Hahahaha! Now see, that's a great joke right there. Now stop being silly and continue writing like always. That is, awesomely great. :B

[ghaidin]

*bites, scratches*

:)