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[sailorsues]

Day three of the horrible summer cold. Please kill ne, kthxbai.

Title: The Sailor Satellite Chronicles
Author: Nightfire01
Summary: "UPDATED-Sailor Triton.Each planet has its own sailor senshi. And so does every satellite of each planet. Unless I get more reviews, this story will be DISCONTINUED!"

Name: Theophanu Lavastine.
Species: Human/Senshi

Comments

[rosehiptea]

Unless I get more reviews, this story will be DISCONTINUED!"
And that's supposed to make me do what?

"Charon satellite power make-up!"
That's a joke, right?

[arionhunter]

You know your contacts are bad when you read charon as Sharon for a second...

"Israeli Prime Minister power make-up!"

[duckyblues]

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD OH DEAR GODS XDDDDD MENTAL IMAGE SHARON IN A MINI SkIRT AND FUKU XDDDDDDD Theres something for the Palestinians X33

[sarcastic_celt]

Grah! I am so tired of seeing author notes that demand reviews (or in particularly ballsy cases demand a specific number of reviews). I makes me not want to review them at all. In these cases they don't even want reviews they just want ego strokes.

I understand the basic human need for notes I know I am guilty of checking my LJ for comments but i don't EXPECT them. Hmmm...maybe I am going about this all wrong. Maybe I should start to demand them with ever entry.

can you see it now? "I need at least 4 notes or no new entry"

And then my diary would die and the world would not care and they would be right in doing so. the end

[xenylamine]

[cries] Completely and painfully pointless! I wish I could erase reviews from it so it never sees the light of day again...

[sailormac]

The "Satellite Power" part of her transformation gave me a disturbing mental image of the Satellite of Love bots from Mystery Science Theater 3000 in sailor fukus.

[eden_guardian]

OMG!!! :: starts having fits of laughter :: LMAO. Crow in a fuku? :: dies

Sounds rather familiar

[callisto_chan]

First time commenting here, though I've been reading for a while.

Grammar-wise, this story is all right, though the name is rather odd against the other Japanese names...Haruka, Michiru, Hotaru, Setsuna, and then Theophanu. It just doesn't seem to fit in. (Though the name, for some reason, reminds me of the name Theodora).

She was the eldest daughter of a rich and powerful noble family on Charon but in truth, her life was empty. The endless routine of parties, teas, and balls bored her.

And for some reason, this reminds me of Rose in Titanic.

Re: Sounds rather familiar

[catiana_albatou]

Actually, this seems to be a rather worrying feature of fanfic Senshi. I have a friend who writes SM fanfiction (and I hope like hell that she doesn't read this, because I'm scared she might hurt me...) and none of her OC Senshi have Japanese names. They all have vaguely 'Sueish names like 'Amelie'.

Re: Sounds rather familiar

[rosehiptea]

In all fairness, finding names for OCs drives me up a wall. I usually write OCs of the "show up and get killed" variety, and no Mary-Sues) but I have done things like use Harry Potter names in anime (and the other way around) and my poor late mother got to be Walter's old girlfriend (well, see, she was the right age, and... yeah...) Sorry to get so off-topic, just explaining why I'm willing to forgive something like "Amelie".

[uniswift87]

*cringes* I'll give her credit for knowing the mythology of Charon, but still...