The End? Chapter 1

[sailinghearts]

Police Commisoner James Gordon sat on his backstep holding a bottle in a brown paper bag.  Night had long fallen, his shift had ended 3 hours ago.  Plenty of time to come home, find the emply apartment and go to the nearest store for something to cope.  Besides his personal effects, four things had sat on the kitchen counter.  Two were this year's

Comments

[brieze]

D: Amazing chapter. I love angst so much, it's scary.
I'm excited for more!

[sailinghearts]

Your wish is my command. Ch 2 is short, but up. Gonna write more tonight, but gotta decide where to go.

[monicaop]

They are dead?? Really dead?? Wow, this was really strong but so sad!!! Great story, I hope you write more, be well.

[sailinghearts]

yep. really dead. gotta lose it all to know how far you will go to get the person responsible.

[natalitha]

ooh i like this so far pls pls pls update soon ths is a really interesting story line hope jims family is ok

[sailinghearts]

sorry, but the family isn't ok. i am planning on writing more tonight, when littles have gone to bed.

[brushed_velvet]

Oh man, the contents of the envelope really shocked me! You totally sucker-punched me there. Poor Jim!

I hope you continue this. :)

[sailinghearts]

Glad I caught you by surprise. Hope I can keep you hooked.

[ghostwalker]

Ouch. Poor Gordon.
That last line was really powerful.
Great work, can't wait to read more. ^_^

[sailinghearts]

Thank you! ch 2 is short but up. hopefully more will be up tonight, like a longer ch 3.