Title: Wanderers Far At Sea
Author:
sail_aweighArtist:
votakuMixer:
vengefuldemon69Betas:
thistlerose,
lindmereSeries: AOS
Characters/Pairings: Kirk/McCoy, Uhura/Spock, Spike/Surprise Guest, Khan, Marla McGivers, Joanna McCoy
Warnings: beheadings and gore, swearing, minor character death
Rating: R for violence and language
Word Count: ~39,000
Summary: STXI/Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel the
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I really enjoyed beta-ing this even though I'm a complete Buffy virgin, but I'm in awe of the way you worked out the mythology, merging two not-very-compatible worlds but making Jim (and Jo's) backstory seem plausible and working it all out with the narrative device of a very worried and confused Bones who doesn't know what's going on but trusts Jim (eventually). Jim letting himself have feelings for Bones made a very sweet counterpoint to all the action, which was kick ass.
Jo's voice came through so strongly, and she seemed like a real teenager--curious and confused about all the strange things happening to her, which is kind of a nice metaphor for adolescence. I'm glad we got to see her in the flesh at the end! And I don't know who Illyria is, but Uhura + Illyria was ultra formidable. Splendid job, bb!
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I think I've learned a very valuable lesson from big bang. Start early. I don't know if I'm going to try to do this again next year, but I think any stories I write from now on I'm going to do much more detailed outlines before I ever start the writing process itself.
I felt I had to bring Jo in for a cameo. She was the spark for so much of the story, it wouldn't have been fair to leave the audience hanging. I left a lot of other stuff hanging, but not that! I had to short shrift so much of the end to finish this up. As long as the action was exciting, that's all I really hoped to achieve by the end. Next year (will I or won't I, who knows?) I'll have a complete outline ready to rock.
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Uhura as Illyria was absolutely inspired.
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