My sweetest Sin - Chapter VII

Aug 05, 2010 11:36

My problems go from bad to worse. Oh, save me from them all!

(Psalm 25:17)

Raindrops were still crashing heavily against the cold glass of the window Yunho was pressed into, his naked skin instantly starting to shiver due to the stark contrast to its own heated condition. Somewhere out of town the thunderstorm neared its peak, including the ( Read more... )

drama, chaptered, romance, angst, smut, my sweetest sin, rating: nc 17

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jadyuu August 5 2010, 21:48:48 UTC
Honnestly.

That was beautiful.
This love making was the best, I mean we could easily feel Yunho's feelings. But Yunho took advantage of Jaejoong... Well, I don't really know if Yoochun did something, but well...*sigh*
Yunho is afraid. Clearly afraid. The words he wrote on the paper were awful, nearly disgusting, Jaejoong is gonna be so hurt...

You know what ? lol everytime I read in a fanfic that someone is being drugged, I think about a friend of mine. Well, it wasn't the same as Jaejoong right xD But someone offered a drink to her (she was clubbing with us) and she drank it. And then she became strange, she just drank one drink but she couldn't walk straight, was laughing about everything and her eyes weren't focused. So we took her home, we had to carry her because she fell asleep on the way. But then (wait for the drama xD)in her sleep (we put her in bed and we slept on her living because we were worried) she did an allergy to the thing this man put in her drink. Her body reacted against it. early in the morning I heard her coughing so I went to see and she was coughing blood, shaking, she was burning and she wasn't conscious ! PANIC AT HOME! We called an ambulance and she was saved in extremis, she nearly dyed because her body did an allergy ! A stupid allergy !
Well, now she stopped drinking, of course.

And OMG, I'm talking about my stupid life xD But I was thinking about it while reading this chapter so I thought I could write it, I really hope I didn't bother you ! >___<

Have a nice day/evening/night/everything! Good luck for your next chapter ^^

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saihchan August 11 2010, 13:22:46 UTC
Hey darling!
First of all: I'm very happy you enjoyed the chapter! Yunho is very, very afraid of getting too close to people, so yeah, his words were aweful, but that's like the only way he knows to handle this - pushing people away from him :( Let's hope Jae will be a better influence on him and can help him opening up ;)
About the story of your friend: gosh, this is horrible!!! I tend to try and never drink from a glass that left my hand (except when I leave it in a friend's hand), but I guess in a happy atmosphere like a party people tend to get careless. And on top of that, she even had an allergy? Damn, poor girl!!! Great thing she has good friends as you, who stayed by her side and called the ambulance! You can be proud of you, you all reacted perfectly!
I wish guys like the one giving the drink to your friend would all end up in prison, but truth is, they're often not caught. Lets just hope that Karma will get him - I do believe in some kind of justice within this universe, so he should get punished!

Don't worry about talking about rl here^^ If you thought about it and felt like sharing this story, I'm gladly reading it :)

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