Comments | saigo_no_lady: 忍ぶ感情 Shinobu Kanjyo

boblemon in saigo_no_lady

忍ぶ感情 Shinobu Kanjyo

Jul 01, 2012 18:02

Title: Part 3: Shinobu Kanjyo
Rating: PG13 (violence)
Pairing: Jun/Ohno, Sho/Nino
Genre: action, AU
Chapter: twenty-five
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Ohno Satoshi is the student of a strong ninja lord who has lived his life following his teacher’s strict guidance. But what happens when he slowly learns ( Read more... )

series: ninja, pairing: sho/nino, pairing: jun/ohno

Comments 27

mellastella July 1 2012, 12:27:27 UTC

Actually, I'm good with seeing both the one-shot AND this fic being uppdated. DOuble whammy, you know? ;D Naaaaaaah, you do what you want.

Anyway, I sincerely hope that Jun's okay. I hope Jyani doesn't make Oh-chan leave the group and I hope Ohno finally sticks up for himself against Jyani. *starts praying* xD

I'll wait eagerly for the next chapter. :3

boblemon July 2 2012, 09:11:06 UTC

Just trying to pace myself because otherwise I won't have any updates for like... a month. XD Until I can finish what's WIP.

You have a lot of hopes for the next chapter. ^__^; But that's really the way things should turn out, right? With everyone happy and at the places they need to be.

Thanks for reading and your comment! :D

mugen_ai3 July 1 2012, 13:06:48 UTC

Thanks for the fast update. Jyani is coming hmm... Curious.

I look forward to your one-shot

boblemon July 2 2012, 09:11:34 UTC

You're welcome! I tried my best since I know the last chapter was intense.

Thanks for reading! ^__^

coolohoh July 1 2012, 13:08:09 UTC

ahhhhhhh cliffhanger! what would jyani do? >

boblemon July 2 2012, 09:11:53 UTC

Another one, right? XD Jyani... has his own agenda.

helenmaldon July 1 2012, 15:08:31 UTC

Ahhhhhh I love how we got Sho's perspective after such a long time, I wasn't thinking about it but I think I missed Sho ninja, and somehow he was just perfect to narrate all these events! And AIBA. Oh AIBA, amazing doctor who is so calm in the face of everything!! I just loved everyone so much in this chapter.
And Ohno...somehow I think that maybe Ohno has decided that his love is more important to him than Jyani is??? Anxious to see what happens next, this chapter filled me with love for the whole gang <3

boblemon July 2 2012, 09:15:33 UTC

The others are neglected for Jun and Ohno... But Sho was the POV this time, so that we could see everything that happened. I really love to switch them around, actually, because there's a lot you can do with each character in different situations.

Aiba who held everything together until he couldn't any more, and then Sho was recovered enough to hold things for him. They both did a good job~

I'm glad you loved these guys so much here. Crisis brings us together or something like that. ^__^ Thanks for reading! I feel like I should do a fic trade with you or something.

helenmaldon July 3 2012, 05:28:05 UTC

Yes, we should do one some time! I love your prompts <3

deelovesryo July 1 2012, 15:41:59 UTC

Oh, so thrilling again, but I knew Aiba would save them, I liked the gap between his level-headed behaviour in the crisis and how he lets himself cry when there is no more to do and he is next to Sho. Sho that has his own fears but consoles Nino and Aiba and stays calm in order to let Aiba space to work and grant them the privacy they need ( ... )

boblemon July 2 2012, 09:20:23 UTC

It was really Aiba's chance to shine, just like you said. He held himself together until he didn't have to anymore. And Sho is the negotiator, helping everyone that he can to make sure things work out. :)

You're thoughts about Jyani are pretty good. Ohno's certainly made his decision already, and Jyani isn't an idiot. ^__^ Plus it's his fault anyway, and Ohno has shown us all how hard-headed he can be when he wants to.

Haha, you did scold Jyani! XD I'm glad you're so into it, that really makes me happy.

Thanks for reading! Hopefully I'll get some stuff done!