忍ぶ感情 Shinobu Kanjyo

[boblemon]

Title: Part 3: Shinobu Kanjyo
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Jun/Ohno, Sho/Nino
Genre: action, AU
Chapter: twenty
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Ohno Satoshi is the student of a strong ninja lord who has lived his life following his teacher’s strict guidance. But what happens when he slowly learns he has to live

Comments

[doctoggy]

Yay an update!
Yay making progress!
Yay intervention!
Yay extended contest deadlines.

That is all I have for now^^*

[boblemon]

That's a lot of yays but I'm happy. ^__^

Thank you~

[helenmaldon]

THAT KISS.

Thank you, I had the worst day and this chapter made me feel so much better ^^ So many things I loved about this chapter:

-THE KISS!!!!!
-Some welcome Aiba POV, I love hearing his cute thinking about the situation, and I like the plot about his love interest, Aiba sewing his way into Yuka's heart is too adorable xD
-Sexy Sakumiya cameo :D
-Wise counsellor Mao returns!
-Imagining a cool Arashi house for them to live in ^^
-Promises of future plots to get Juntoshi together!

Loved this packed chapter : )

[boblemon]

:DDDD Glad it was good! I feel like we've been building up to that for a while.

And Aiba POV, yes, it's been so long for him...! Poor Aiba-chan. He didn't get much room in there either...

And sexy Sakumiya~ I couldn't help myself, they were bound to be sexy eventually! In fact this story has had no sex for how long it is! O: Impossible!

Loved your comment, thank you!

[coolohoh]

oh yay! so finally things get moving between ohno and jun... i really can't wait to see wat kame has planned for them!

[boblemon]

Things are sort of moving! :D

[deelovesryo]

Oh! The previous chapter was so heart touching, Ohno talking about his feelings and his own desperation, Jun's resolution to make him take a decision (he was so cute talking with the others) and then his jealousy and frustration and the last part was pretty romantic, when Ohno finds him in the forest and is overtaken by his love for Jun allowing himself a moment of weakness.
And besides Nino was so damn cool for the whole chapter, such a great friend!

In this chapter again it has to be Jun who made the progress, confessing in such a sweet way, the kiss was romantic and hot at the same time, and so much in character with this pair. Loved it!
All the plot about the Juntoshi mission was funny and cute and I'm happy to read more about Aiba, even if his partner surprised me, but this silly sewing couple and Sakumiya's not-anymore-secret-reunions really helps to alleviate all the Juntoshi drama.

BTW I hope I can post the Juntoshi icon soon, but rl issues and lack of inspiration are being a problem lately T_T

[boblemon]

Wow, your comment made me so happy to read! These two chapters were pretty different, but I think they also compliment each other really well, sort of overcoming the problems right? Especially Ohno's feelings came to the surface right in time to make everything that much dramatic for Jun.

You're right, Aiba and Sakumiya helped to alleviate the stuff between Jun and Ohno, just as they should. ^__^ Actually, if it was left up to just the two of them nothing would ever change...!

Take your time with the icon if you need to, I totally understand what you mean. I hope I can find some inspiration now that I have free time...

[mugen_ai3]

Great chapter. Sakumiya was wonderful. Aiba and possible!Aiba girlfriend...yay! Jun definitely making the first move. Way to go Jun-kun! Leader, stop thinking, start the rabu-rabu nao!

[boblemon]

Haha, thanks for your input. ^__^ Couples all over the place, right?