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忍ぶ心 Shinobu Kokoro

Sep 14, 2011 21:48

Title: Part 2: Shinobu Kokoro
Rating: PG13 (mild violence, some sexuality)
Pairing: Jun/Ohno, Sho/Nino
Genre: action, AU
Chapter: eleven
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Ohno Satoshi is the student of a strong ninja lord who has lived his life following his teacher’s strict guidance. But what happens when ( Read more... )

series: ninja, pairing: sho/nino, pairing: jun/ohno

Comments 34

shunluv September 14 2011, 13:06:28 UTC

thanks^^
aww poor Jun trying to advance on Ohno but Ohno keep avoiding him and instead growing more distance T_T
i hope they would get along again soon maybe after he safe Jun from danger<3
loving the Nakai and Touma story as well xD

so glad to see Jun have change a lot and have grown up<3

boblemon September 15 2011, 08:08:02 UTC

Yep, Jun's growing up now. He was pretty pathetic at the beginning wasn't he? Except Ohno realized how deep he was and tried to back off we'll see if that works or not.

Nakai and Touma were fun to write. A few more people will come up too! ^__^

Thanks for reading~

pirate_genesis September 14 2011, 14:48:23 UTC

I really like the part when Jun was imitating all of Arashi. I can imagine Aiba's look of amuse, Sho's look of shock (and proud), and Nino's look of annoyed. And Ohno is pure gold. ^___^ Jun is seriously gonna be the death of Ohno AND me. XDD

But oh the cliffhanger! You just have to put the angst when we have all the fluffs. O_O

boblemon September 15 2011, 08:09:39 UTC

I'm glad you liked that part~ It was fun to think about and write. :)

Unfortunately... Just when it was sort of moving in a happy direction excitement hits!! XD You understand this story too well.

Thanks for reading!

elvenknight16 September 14 2011, 15:01:12 UTC

I love the update~
Seriously this series is amazing!!
I adore your Juntoshi in here, they're quite cute ^_^
I cannot wait for the next chapter =D
Great Job Dear.

boblemon September 15 2011, 08:19:58 UTC

I'm glad you like this story~ Thanks for reading and your nice comment! <3

vleong September 14 2011, 16:37:37 UTC

I really do hope JUNTOSHI will end up together!XD Nice story line you HVE got there!XXD

boblemon September 15 2011, 08:20:27 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm sure Juntoshi will get together before the end, lol. ^__^

finalu_beamu September 14 2011, 19:20:48 UTC

^0^ ♥
Poor Jun fails at combat XD but at least they found out he's proficient at illusions

'Jun had practiced that look on Sho one day and was surprised to find the archer whimper and scuttle off, telling Nino that something had happened to Jun.' < I can imagine this part so much XD

It was good to see Toma too =^.^=

I want the next chapter already but I understand how busy real life can get, so I'll just be patient *waits quietly*

boblemon September 15 2011, 08:22:40 UTC

Jun is still failing, yes. XD But he's starting to make up for it right? Maybe...

And he's making more friends. :)

Yep, life is busy but I always end up remember to update in the end, so don't worry. Hopefully it'll be a week or less. Thanks for reading and commenting~