忍ぶ意思 Shinobu Ishi

Jul 21, 2011 21:42

Title: Part 1: Shinobu Ishi
Rating: PG13 (for mild violence)
Pairing: TBA, Ohno-centric
Genre: action, AU
Chapter: six
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Ohno Satoshi is the student of a strong ninja lord who has lived his life following his teacher’s strict guidance. But what happens when he slowly learns ( Read more... )

series: ninja, pairing: sho/nino, pairing: jun/ohno

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wy_nike July 21 2011, 13:07:04 UTC
WHEEEEE *runs off to read*

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wy_nike July 21 2011, 13:22:27 UTC
*SPLUTTERS* OH NO NINO!!!! T.T
oh dear oh dear i hope he's ok, he should be since he has the other 3 to help him and! i hope they learn the lesson and arm nino with a bunch of darts laced with drugs that make people drowsy too. like in case his target has someone else with him, and he doesnt wanna kill innocent people, he could just shoot them w the darts. and awwwww. angsty sakumiya. im sure that this will catalyst their relationship tho! i hope the next chpt would be a happier one for nino!

and and! enjoy ur vacation!! ^^

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boblemon July 21 2011, 13:43:54 UTC
Yeah, I guess Nino needs more weapons too, huh? Their dynamics will change now that they're focusing on not killing people, but I'm sure that's going to be pretty subtle coming up. :)

Angsty Sakumiya, haha. At least for a little while while they're both jealous over Aiba. ^__^ This is the first relationship to develop, and it should do so rather quickly, so I hope it's good.

Thanks for reading (so fast!) and your comment! I'm really looking forward to my vacation too~

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kazu_vha July 21 2011, 15:43:26 UTC
Ninoo.....!!! Nooo....!!

And you leave it there?!? for a vacation?? lol

I think it's my first time commenting on this fic.. :)
(I just make a resolution to comment more on the fic I love)

I kind of expect Sakumiya to happen actually... XDD
I know Nino is so stubborn that he reject the help and pretend to be okay, but poor him... T_T
He will be okay right??

oh, thanks for the update and enjoy your vacation!!.. :D
I will wait patiently for the next chapter.. :)

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boblemon July 23 2011, 14:15:38 UTC
XD Yes I left Nino hanging for my vacation~ I'm so mean. ^__^

Thanks for reading! You don't have to comment, but I always love to hear what you think about it. :) Was Sakumiya predictable? Maybe when Nino started getting jealous of Aiba, right? I think they're cute together, trying to protect each other.

I'm having a good time so thank you~

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kazu_vha July 23 2011, 15:25:22 UTC
I don't think it's predictable, but I started to hope for Sakumiya at Nino's emo and how Sho supporting him through his emo life... :D

I really don't mind any pairing, they all will look cute together,,,, XD

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deelovesryo July 21 2011, 16:50:08 UTC
Aaaaaaaah! you want to give me a heart attack!? SO EXCITING! I still have my heart racing! It's like when you watch movies, you know they are going to be rescued because the movie cant end so soon but the moment doesnt come and the heroes cant keep up and you cant help but to think "when! when is going to come the help! they are going to die for god's sake!!!" Hahaha, really the action was great ( ... )

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boblemon July 29 2011, 06:50:19 UTC
I know what you mean. XD I know they'll be okay, but when will they be okay?! Haha. I'm glad the action was good, there's so much of it in this story.

Ohno's trying hard, yes, and probably some of it is because he's worried about his friends naturally, especially after his talk with Jyani. =A= He doesn't want anyone to get hurt because they didn't plan well.

^__^ The Sakumiya relationship is going to come up fast and there's a reason for it, so to speak. I actually meant to make this Sakuraiba, but Sakumiya just came out. >_<

XD Sho on Shiyagare with Gackt~ He takes his failing so well sometimes, after he was going through all the effort to blame it on his pants. XDXD Fail!Sho is the cutest! Although not the best trait for a ninja, I couldn't resist~

Thanks for your great comment! I love to hear your feedback!

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kiwiniki_jas July 21 2011, 17:29:34 UTC
omg O.O
This whole freaking chapter had me in suspense~ I knew right away when Nino didnt do anything about that lady that he was going to get injured. Tsk tsk.

What the heck is going to happen?! How can you leave us on a cliff hanger?! :O

Have a nice vacation~ ♥

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boblemon July 29 2011, 07:09:06 UTC
How can I put it... Like, although I love happy endings, and I want Nino to be happy and not have to kill people, looking at it from a "what would really happen in this case" point of view I had to do it. But it made a good suspenseful fight, right? ^__^

Sorry about the cliff hanger~ Bad timing for my vacation, hee hee.

Thanks for reading and everything! I'm enjoying myself so far. :)

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finalu_beamu July 21 2011, 23:40:29 UTC
D: Nino~
Very good chapter ^0^ Sad that their good strategy didn't exactly work out ^^; and the little jealousy bits from Nino and Sho were adorable ♥
Thanks for this ^^

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boblemon July 29 2011, 17:24:12 UTC
It almost worked out! >_< But if everything was perfect it wouldn't be as interesting, right? And I really liked Nino and Sho's childish jealous over Aiba too~

Thanks for reading!

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