Just Another Love Story- Part 3

[boblemon]

Title: Just Another Love Story- Part 3
Rating: R/NC17
Pairing: Matsuken/Nino
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Just when he had given up trying, Nino manages to find love.
Note: Not betaed. Also, someone just subbed the video here at arashi_on of the two of them in L.A., which is what this chapter is about.

Part 1

Comments

[kokkaii]

OH YAY! as soon as I saw the update, I devoured the whole chapter XD you have noooo idea how much I was craving for this pair,

LOVE IT! Ugh, so freakin much. I'm pretty much a Nino/Anyone fan, but this is BY FAR my favorite Nino pair XD If I've mentioned this before, I'm really sorry ^^ I'm so infatuated with them. It's just that, for me, their relationship (on TV and interviews and such) has no hint of pretense, unlike Ohmiya that I sometimes feel has a degree of exaggeration. But, oh well, that's Nino and his love for Riida's butt...

Usually, fluff is not one of my favourite genres, prefering conflict instead, but this was just absolutely beautiful. You portrayed their love so so well - that what they felt for each other is truly very deep - and I could feel it eminating in waves back and forth between them. I was really overwhelmed ^^ It's rare to read a romantic story where love isn't just sweet but touching as well.
The part where Matsuken and Nino said they loved each other was gorgeous.

I loved how you incorporated the fear of being discovered into the sweetness of the whole thing. It adds to the realism and the believability of the whole story. <3

LOL, I teared up at the end... just realizing how important their relationship is for them to risk their own careers.

Ok flailing done. I will memory this for sure!

AND happy birthday!!!

(I was drawing you a Ninoken to thank you for writing the last chapter and then, wow, I guess I'll consider it as your birthday present? XD Oh and can we be friends? XD )

[boblemon]

You are so right! It's got the natural-ness of Ohmiya, but with the subtly of an actual relationship and some discretion on who knows about them although sometimes they just want to have fun. Like Nino wants to tease the hell out of him but restrains himself. XDXD

Hmm. I write fluff a lot, but it's difficult for fluff to make up an entire story, so that's part of the reason a little tension with Arashi and real life was put in there. Maybe it was a little exaggerated, but I'm really not sure how easy their relationship would be in Japan/Johnny's.

You said so many nice things that I'm pretty flustered otherwise. ^__^ I really wanted this to be a success to bring out more Matsuken/Nino fans, and by reading your comments I definitely feel like it was good.

So thank you so much for everything! And please draw me Ninoken. m(__)m

[boblemon]

By the way I just added you as a friend. PX I fail