Spring Exchange Fic 2010 [1/4]

[sageofwind_21]

Title: To Build a Home [1/4]
Author: Me
Rating: PG-13/light R
Word Count: app. 8,000 (with notes)
Warning: Enough fluff to rot your teeth and bones, a little bit of Cold War angst, and possible OoC situations, America being deep, self-beta’d.
Summary: Still in the slump of the recession, America proposes a ‘stay-at-home’ date. Russia whole-heartedly

Comments

[nota_lone]

I completely love it! Russia/America is my current OTP and this is crazy well written.

But I do have a slightly OCD suggestion. If Russia spends so much time on planes, he probably only takes one carry on to skip bag checking. Especially if he only needs clothes for a week and has stuff at Alfred's.
Sorry. Incredible amounts of lost luggage have taught me this well.

[sageofwind_21]

Thank you! This makes me feel better since I self-beta'd.

I'm sorry, it doesn't make much sense, does it? I've only gone through the dreaded baggage claim once and I don't have experience outside of that. ^^;

[nota_lone]

Yeah, the story is great and everything else seems completely legit.

And it's really not that big of a deal. It would make sense to anyone who hasn't spent three days in plane clothes in Paris (you look silly, lemme tell you). :)

[sageofwind_21]

I think that's one of the best comments I've ever received. I've never been told that my
fic was legit. :D

Man, that must have sucked. I only flew from NC to FL to get on a cruise ship. XD

[nota_lone]

Legitness to the max, fo shizzle.

I mostly just felt gross. Underwear! I never loved you till I lost you!

[sageofwind_21]

♥

I bet. Oh, man, I can't imagine going without clean underwear. It would be torture, especially in another country!