Comments | saffronlie: Share the Rain, part 2

saffronlie

Share the Rain, part 2

Jan 18, 2004 19:29

Because I'm slack, I'm only now posting the second part of this HP fic which really isn't so long as to merit three posts, but oh well. The first part can be found here, and there will be one more part, soon ( Read more... )

fic, harry potter

Comments 8

glitterberries January 18 2004, 09:48:01 UTC

Am I allowed to read this one? :P

saffronlie January 18 2004, 12:18:50 UTC

No, you have to avert your eyes until the story is finished. :p

glitterberries January 19 2004, 08:12:47 UTC

Unfair. Why cant I read it?

It cant be THAT bad? Evil child.

mesalina104 January 19 2004, 15:13:23 UTC

OMFG!! You know I have been toying with what is going on b/w Hermione and Ron for so long... Ever since the Krum dating and all... But I just love your piece!!!! OMG!!! I'm hoping to read the last part and SOOONNNN!!!

saffronlie January 20 2004, 07:39:32 UTC

Thank you so much, Mesa! (I know your other name, but can I call you Mesa? I like that for a nickname!) I have to admit that I love Ron/Hermione as a canon pairing, but I don't usually read fanfic about them together because it tends to get quite smushy. I like to think that with this story I've taken them to an extreme that is actually quite possible, but won't ever be seen in the books.

anonymous January 19 2004, 15:25:55 UTC

You're a weird, weird person

riko January 20 2004, 20:32:46 UTC

I can't even begin to describe what this story does to me. There so much here, layers on layers, I don't know where to start explaining. First, I guess, your writing is beautiful. Dark, so slightly disturbing, dripping with bitter and at the same time...melancholy. I envy. I really do.

And Hermione! Man, I don't know if this is what you were aiming for at all, but I have never seen a Hermione like this. She's strong and then fragile and so, so human.

All three of them are so fallible and REAL it hurts.

I've read and re-read this at least three times since I got home for school. And I'm certain I'll be back again.

saffronlie January 21 2004, 01:36:19 UTC

Thank you. Thank you so much.

It hurt me to write this! LOL. I was never sure which way Hermione was going to go; she's a mixed-up little girl, the poor dear. It was hard to let these three stumble around in my head and not know how to help them (I'm sure you understand about characters in the head and all! ;)). I really appreciate your comments though.