XFMR - Crushing On You

[saesama]

Title: Crushing On You
Fandom: Transformers
Characters/pairings: Brawl/Ratchet
Rating: R
Summary: He could break, he could escape, or he could die. Maybe he'd just do all three at once.
Warnings: Erm. Mindfuckery, semi-graphic mech gore, master/slave, ish-non-con robo-porn, general disrespect of a dead corpse.
Notes: helestor helped me out once upon a

Comments

[quidamling]

Guh. Damn good story. Rawr! Brawl is creepy as heck.

Ratchet gets out, after a face-full of something unpleasant for Brawl and maybe why he is stuck with that delightfully fashionable cuboidal flat head?

>: And Ironhide's outside ready to cart Ratchet off to First Aid? Plz?

[saesama]

...and maybe why he is stuck with that delightfully fashionable cuboidal flat head?

8D I lol'd

re: Hide & Aid: I honestly see them defying the entirety of the Autobot chain-o-command (who reluctantly but strongly think Ratch is dead) to chase a half-assed ghost of a rumor across the world and meet Ratchet about halfway out of the wherever-he-is and proceed to help him grimly kick much booty.

Hm. Once the Megs muse stops waxing poetic and horny at the Optimus muse, I may poke this a bit more.

[quidamling]

^-^ Hey, I like your 'verses, I'll take anything. Megs jumping OP can be entertaining, too.

But oh please at some point bang that continuation out. 'Hide and 'Aid would traipse around whole planet for Ratchet. And mebbe drag Wheeljack to help leave destruction in their wake....

Can beg/plead/bribe with shinies... or random Will funnies?

[bluebirdsoaring]

Poor, poor Rachet! I think the mindgames- bringing him impossible to save mechs is almost worse than the forced 'facing...esp for a medic whose dying inside just to save one other bot! Wow, this is powerful!

[catraven]

Very powerful writing. The quiet desperation is palpable.

However this turns out, I fear our beloved medic is never going to be quite right again.

[heslestor]

Sheesh, when your muses decide to do something, they don't go about it half way, do they? Didn't really know what to expect, it certainly wasn't this.

And on that note; asdfghjkl; Oh, Ratchet, way to pull at the heart strings there. Makes me want to reach through my monitor and bludgeon Brawl. I kinda almost want Ratch to show Brawl why it's a bad idea to mess with someone who knows your insides better than you do. Possibly with 'Hide, Aid and maybe even 'Jack making the place look like nothing more than the after effects of an asteroid impact. But those are just my musings. *offers muses bribes of whatever they want, since poking them will probably not be a good idea considering the current situation.*

On a slightly random note, had the Random Pairing Generator open in another tab. The first thing that pops up is First Aid/Brawl/involuntary. The next two involved Ratchet, Megatron and Bonecrusher.

[saesama]

My muses shall be the death of me :B

*hands over Brawl toy* bludgeon away :>

I'm pretty sure the three of them go undercover together to find him and yeah, they make sure everyone and their grandsire know they were there by the end (Brawl escapes, obviously, but certainly not intact) I kinda feel bad for what the muses want me to put First Aid through :V (he's so innocent! *flail*)

re: poking the muses: I just had the greatest mental image of a small little Ratchet with BIG HUGE TEETH getting poked and being all snarly about it :D

THE PROMPT GENERATOR OBVIOUSLY CAN READ MY MIND WHUT. I like your generator a lot better, mine keeps giving me things like Judy/Megatron/cookies and I'm just like 'r u srs?'

[heslestor]

This sort of gives the whole scene in the movie where Ratchet does a ninja leap over Brawl and cuts his arm clean off a whole new meaning.

After the three of them are done with the area, I wonder how long it's going to be before it's habitable again.

re: First Aid: But you have to! The Generator read your mind and everything. And because Ratchet strikes me as the kind of person who is all 'do what you want to me, but leave my friends alone' type. And if Ratchet was unhappy with Brawl before, doing anything to First Aid is going to make him go nuclear.

re: muses: The image I'm getting is a Mighty Mugs Ratchet crossed over with the Chub Chubs. Bet you could end the war right quick with an army like that.

Cookies? I've never got cookies in any of my prompts. However, I now have the wonderful image of Judy serving Megatron and a few other Decepticons tea and crumpets, with the 'Cons all horribly flustered and confused, since they were just about to step on the organic who is now serving them food, and they're not quite sure how to

[femme4jack]

Oh Ratchet!!!! This is beautifully bleak and twisted. Now off to read the sequels <3