[[ SHINee ]] Parallel Lines 4/7.
Title: Parallel Lines.
Author: sacryde_riots.
Fandom: SHINee.
Pairing: Onew/Minho, with a side of Jonghyun/Taemin.
Rating: PG-15.
Summary: Trust Minho to get himself sent to a parallel universe the one day he has the dorm all to himself.
Status/length: Incomplete, 2,600 words.
Author's Note: This fic is kind of AU and kind of not. Dedicated to my ( Read more... )
Author: sacryde_riots.
Fandom: SHINee.
Pairing: Onew/Minho, with a side of Jonghyun/Taemin.
Rating: PG-15.
Summary: Trust Minho to get himself sent to a parallel universe the one day he has the dorm all to himself.
Status/length: Incomplete, 2,600 words.
Author's Note: This fic is kind of AU and kind of not. Dedicated to my ( Read more... )
AH THIS CHAPTER WAS SO DAMN CUTE~ djkfhsdkjfhdskf *dies* your Jinki is so cute and Minho -_-; don't be so stupid!!! Of course Jinki can fall in love with you~ ♥ :D
I loved this line:
"Y-you mean. You want me. To go with you. To karaoke?"
YES JINKI MINHO WANTS YOU 8D (sorry hahaha couldn't help myself ;D) fhsdjkfsdkf
ugh this is just so cute~ ^^ I think you should make it as many chapters as fits? If that makes sense? D:
Oh and I spotted these:
"I don't think your friends like me very much," Jinki whispered, practically clinging to Minho's arm as they left the karoke booth to get a round of drinks.
^ karaoke XD
"Yeah, but you were all serious about it," Jinki frowned, waving his hand in front of Minho's face. Minho looked up, only to burst out laughing at the dead serious expression on Jinki's face in what he knew was supposed to be an immitation of his own.
^ imitation
*cough* don't mind me :/ I just yeah... notice spelling mistakes sometimes *hides* ^^;
but I really reaaaally love this ♥ :D can't wait to read more~ :DDD ♥
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AHHHH I'M GLAD YOU THINK SO!!! XDDDDD I'm so glad you think my Jinki is cute, I was paranoid about whether or not he would be believable. XDD Minho is an idiot, I say! He'll get what's coming to him~
LMFAO OH GOD I DIDN'T EVEN NOTICE THAT XDDDDDDDDD
Yeah that makes sense~ stretch it out as long as possible without giving up quality, yes? :'DDDDD I will do that, BB. ^^
Ahhhh, thank you! *pulls you out of hiding* I hate making spelling mistakes because I'm usually very good at spelling, so pointing out mistakes is lkjdshgkjshdg thank you. ^^
I'm glad~ :DDD Thank you!!!! ♥
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fgdjkghdk this chapter was so cute and fluffly and made me melt I didn't want it to end :/ ♥ edjhdsf I wonder how Minho will reply @@; will he joke and say "just kidding ;D HAHA did you believe me?" or if how he will react :/
yup he is an idiot. I hope he gets Jinki ♥ LOL. one thing I am curious about D: *fails* like while Minho is in the parallel world what is happening with the Minho in his real world? and when he goes back to his real world... will he be with Jinki (if he got together with him in the parallel one?) or not? If that makes sense *fails* *hides*
same XD but I think when you're typing in a hurry its easy to make typo's :/
love this fic so much :D ♥
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hlkajdhglkjsdg Really? ;o;o;o;o; ♥ Hehe, you'll just have to wait until the next chapter to find out~ (and i have to wait until my minho muse decides to tell me xDD)
The parallel world is kind of a dream-like state, so almost no time is passing in the real world. Like, one day in the parallel world is like one minute in the real world. If that makes sense? And when he goes back to the real world, it will be just him, because the parallel world is only a mirror for the person who is there. And yes it made perfect sense! Stop making me pull you out of your hiding place! *pulls you out from your hiding place* XDDD
Hmm~ that's true. I usually have an automatic spell-check on my internet browser, but it seems like it doesn't work if there's too much text. *shifty eyes*
Thank you! :DDD ♥
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yeah ;_; I will have to be patient *sighs* LOL take your time? :( I hope your Minho muse is feeling happy? *sends naked SHINee over to entertain your Minho muse* 8D does that help your muse? XDDDD
ah that makes sense~ I hope it would be something like that. but I wanted to ask^^; so I'd know how you were blah-ing it. XDD I just wondered if it would effect it so that~ when Minho went back to his real world he might already be with Jinki @@;
sorry T___T; I like hiding? D:
aw hahahahaha~ I always use the spellcheck in word :P ^^;
thats okay~ ♥ *sends over gingerbread men for you to munch on* :DDD
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LOL my minho muse is feeling confused, he's wondering why i'm putting him through all this shit. XD honestly he just wants to screw jinki and get it over with lolol. XDDDDD oh god that helps. he's happy now~~~ XDDD and of course my jinki muse is suddenly wondering why there's another him standing there naked, but... XDDD
ahhhh, okay. actually that's a really good idea. *slaps self for not thinking of that. XDD* but no, time is not affected because then he would be kind of running on auto-pilot back in his world and that wouldn't really make sense. XD
well don't hide. it makes me feel scary D:
WORD HAS SPELLCHECK???? why did i never know that????
GINGERBREAD MEN!!!!!! *munches on them and starts working on more of this fic XD*
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LOL I LIKE YOUR MINHO MUSE "SCREW JINKI" YEAH I APPROVE LOLLLLLL ♥ LOLLLL oh the mental images ♥♥♥
whats a good idea? I like it better if he's not with Jinki in his world ♥ because it means 8D he has to either confess or make him like him and yeah it seems better to me? lol. yeah true lol.
okay sorry D:
LOL @@ thats what the um green and red underlines mean :/ I HATE THE RED AND GREEN UNDERLINES :@ so yeah. XD
*sends over Jinki and Minho gingerbread men* 8D ♥ I am going to bake you millions of gingerbread men to help inspire your muses? :D ♥ and to show you my love & affection & gratitude for this amazing fic~ *o*
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MY MINHO MUSE IS A TOTAL PERVERT IDEK. XDDDDDDD Oh dear, now I'm picture Jinki getting off on a mirror image of him.... shit that's something Jjong would do but lkjahgkjhsdgkjsg ♥♥♥
Haha yeah but I still like the idea of him already being with Jinki in his world. Maybe I'll write like... an alternate ending where that's the case lol.
DDDD: ♥
Haha, well... mine doesn't have red and green underlines? Maybe because I write in wordpad and not word? XDD
Jinki and Minho gingerbread men?!?! *o*o*o*o*o*o*o*o* hagjhkljshdgkjhadgkjhsgouywekjsdknjkhadg. You. You are amazing. Seriously, IDK if I'd even try to get these chapters out quickly if it weren't for your comments so so so so so. Just. Yes. Idek. ♥!!!!!
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but then I feel like it would be dfhsjkf LOL I like the idea of Minho going back and beeing all "hwaiting! 8D" and getting Jinki to like him~ XD ah if you do that I'll read both endings hehehehe :D
oh lol yeah thats why. hahaha wordpad sucks. I have fake word anyways. well its not fake but its pirated.
*nods* yes Jinki and Minho gingerbread men. I had this image of Jinki as a gingerbread man idk and it was so cute but I can't blah come up with a decent fic idea :/
anyways 8D *sends over some more Jinki and Minho gingerbread men* :D actually I think you;re the amazing one ♥ writing this amazing, amazing fic~ ♥♥♥
it does make me happy though that all the TofuHo series I've read have a sci-fi/fantasy sorta theme? :D which I think is awesome :D
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LMFAO oh god I could picture Minho doing that, too. XDDDDDDDDDDD
Well wordpad on Windows 7 is kind of tricked out so it's not that bad, I guess? XD OH GOD PIRATED WORD. I LOVE YOU. *is a pirate* XDD
Pfff, now I feel like drawing that up or something. Haha maybe I'll get that as a tattoo one day; a gingerbread man with Jinki's face slapped on it XDD
It's really not that amazing, dear. XDD And I probably wouldn't have been able to finish it if it weren't for your comments, honestly. ♥ IT WILL BE MY FIRST MULTI-CHAPTERED FIC (well, more than 3 chapters) THAT I WILL FINISH AND IT WILL BE BECAUSE OF YOU. So hush, you're amazing, too. ♥
Haha, really??? I never noticed that, honestly. ^____^
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I kinda fail with grammar D: but my beta is kinda busy at the moment :/
yeah~ 8D he's so competitive~ and I think he'd like the challenge 8D of having to win Jinki's heart (well he's probably already won it but maybe he doesn;t know that? :P) all over again? if that makes sense ;D
ah I haven't even opened wordpad up yet @@;; on my win7 lol. I have a lot of pirated software ;D (pirated photoshop 8D) you name it~ and it's pirated :P hehehhehe :P I don't think the computer companies love me D: but if you do thats makes me excessively happy ♥
awww I wish I could draw :/ now that would be so adorable D: Jinki the gingerbread man awww ♥ so precious D:
well I think its awesome D: and amazing~ ♥ pssh my comments? well its probably all the comments you get? :D right? ♥♥♥ congrats? *throws a gingerbread man party to celebrate* your first multi-chaptered fic~ yay :DDD
(well I think your fic is the third TofuHo series fic I've come across? or 4th? lol. oh but wait I guess its only 2 of them *fails* that have a sci-fi/fantasy theme? XDD
^^ I am glad that you think I help you out 8D or something? help your muses out? XDDDD I fail?
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And I hope you had a lovely nap with lovely SHINee smuttttyyyyy dreams? :P ^^;
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Nooo, your grammar isn't bad at all! At least from your comments and all. Believe me, I've seen worse~ XD
Yeahhh that makes sense. Pff, but I can't think of competitive!Minho or I'll start thinking about the old TofuHo fic that I was writing like... months ago but never finished. XDDDDDDD
Bwahaha, that's brilliant. XDDD I don't have very much pirated software because I'm freaking paranoid, but I have tons of pirated shows and movies and music. XD So I don't think those companies like me very much either. ♥ :DDD
yesss it would be adorable. i wish i could draw too, because i totally would. so freaking prection. XD ♥
you~ don't give yourself enough credit. seriously, the only reason i write is for other people to enjoy it and and and your comments just make me ^______________________^ like no tomorrow XDD
(haha really? i usually don't read sci-fi fics so.... *shame* i had no idea lol
you make my muses happy~ which then helps me write more~ so so so so so. yeah. ♥
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Kekeke, thank you dear~ I did there were lots of lovely SHINee dreams~ not smutty but still. XDDD
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LOL what was that TofuHo about? *curious* :P you should look at that again :P maybe you can finish it now? XDDDDD
ahahaha I have heaps? literally....... heaps! @@ well most of its my dads but yeah I just take what I need. lol. same :D lots of pirated dramas and stuff~
yes omg yes it would be so prection. ♥
awww ^^ well I am glad my comments make you happy~ ♥♥♥ yay :D
weellllll I basically went through and read all the TofuHo fics posted on replay (when I first found replay because no one seemed to post any new ones D:) and there was a sci-fi series? I read it because it was TofuHo and 12+ chapters? lol. It was set in space? lol there is an amazing TofuHo oneshot that is set in space too :O
AHA FOUND IT 8D you should read this:
http://community.livejournal.com/openending/1386.html#cutid1
^ that fic is all kinds of amazing - actually all of her fics are ♥
hehehehe but so is your writing :/ and you know I'm probably going to read all your fics later when I am bored XDDDD
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yay for SHINee dreams? :D
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I'd offer to beta it for you, but... I've only beta'd once for my friend so idek what to do. XDDD
Basically? *looks around to see if anyone else it listening and then leans in to whisper* Onew tries to be all leader-ly and Key and everyone get angry because he'll just break stuff. Minho sees Onew doing something and helps him out secretly, figuring that if Onew wins at being a leader he wins too in a way since he helped out. But Onew of course notices and kljahdgkjhsdg. IDEK, it's lame. *dies*
Haha, I only take something if there's no other way of getting it. Like.... I COULD steal photoshop, but GIMP is free and just as good so I use that. XDDD But when it comes to dramas I have no mercy XD Because they're like $100, wayyyyy too expensive, and then the dvd wouldn't even play where I live. XD I do buy some music when I get the chance, though.
LOLOLOLOL TOFU IN SPACE. I wonder what tofu would taste like in space. That's freaking weird and brilliant lmao. XDDDDD
Oooooooh, okay! I'll definitely read it later. ^^ AND BY THE WAY I READ ONE OF YOUR FICS. The one where Minho comes back from the first Dream Team episode filming and he's all emo because he failed and then Jinki cheers him up and just XDDDDDDD IT WAS ADORABLEEEEEE. ♥ Only I suck with comments so I didn't leave one. XD
Oh god nooooo, don't! All of my old fics are really bad and from over a year ago. The only one I like is the Hanchul one. *facepalm*
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awwwwwwww that idea sounds ADORABLE. I love these (sweet) fics where nothing much happens but its just so cute~ ♥ the ones where Minho takes care of Jinki or just helps him out make me melt so much ;_;!! YOU SHOULD FINISH IT - IT SOUNDS ANYTHING BUT LAME ♥♥♥ IT SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING I WOULD LOVE ;__; ♥
oh right LOL ^^ and I guess you have to be careful because some of the pirated stuff comes with viruses D: but most of its fine^^
and the subtitles would suck if we paid $100 D: I try to buy cds :D I love buying cd's :/ ♥
WELL ITS TOFUHO IN SPACE not Tofu :P
ugh that fic was kinda lame lol. :/ I have another one like that too *lazy* but I am too blah to finish it XD
LOL okay?XD I won't read them then? D:
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BUT BUT BUT. Okay. Maybe. BUT ONLY AFTER I WRITE THE JJONG/TAEMIN SIDE-FIC FOR THIS ONE. *flails*
Yeah, I've had my computer crash because of viruses like.... two or three times in the last 6 months alone, so I'm super careful now. ^^;;
Subbing groups are a million times better no matter what~ and yes, me too! I love buying cds. ♥ Especially kpop cds, they always come in such awesome packaging, especially compared to American/Finnish cds, which are always just the cd and the booklet and the case. XDDDD
BUT I HAVE A THEORY THAT DUBU TASTES LIKE TOFU. Thus tofuho in space would still teach us what tofu tastes like in space. XDDD *crazy* XDD
Nooooooo it wasn't lame!! I could totally picture Minho being like that for real because he's such a poor loser and and and just ♥♥♥
Keke, good. XD God, they're just.... bad. At least compared to this, I guess? IDEK
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