Betrayal

Sep 12, 2010 21:10

Title: Betrayal
Pairing: Broken!Junkwang, Junseung, One-sided!Dookwang
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Junhyung is cheating on Kikwang, thinking that he doesn't know, but in fact, he does and it's killing him.
Author Notes: Requested by cindyxmc! Sorry, it's kinda rushed since school reopen tomorrow. T^T Hopefully you'll like it!

What have he done wrong? )

band: beast, pairing: doojoon/kikwang, pairing: junhyung/kikwang, pairing: junhyung/hyunseung

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sachiko_mizuki September 12 2010, 13:12:23 UTC
SPOT FOR cindyxmc!

Sorry, I left out the part where Junhyung shouldn't know it's Doojoon comforting Kikwang. ;A;

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cindyxmc September 12 2010, 17:21:40 UTC
i'm glad i decided to wake up! haha
but god, i hate junhyung and hyunseung!!! T.T
and i was the one who came up with the plot.
what is wrong with me?!

but i started crying within the first paragraph already.
i knew it was going to be sad and i was right!
my poor baby kwangie, i'm glad doojoon was there for him.
and it's okay, junhyung deserves to know because he got his ass kicked by doojoonie.

but omg, why must you end it in a cliffhanger way?
well, at least i see it in that way! haha
because i totally totally have a continuation for this, =X

kwangie is no longer friends with hyunseung.
yoseob is his closest friend after hyunseung but since hyunseung isn't there anymore,
yoseob is! keke XD LOVE SEOBIE SO MUCH!!<33
and then you know, time flies by and kwangie starts liking doojoon
and doojoon asked for a chance and kwangie said yes.
and while they were on a date, junseung saw them hugging in a tight embrace not wanting to let go.
and junhyung feels all weird inside or whatever.
sighhhhh, so many drama! LOL

I LOVE YOU SO EFFING ( ... )

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prettyboy_seung September 12 2010, 17:26:48 UTC
:O Long comment makes me smile.♥
LOL. Indeed, Junhyung is really hate-able here. But I can't hate Seungie because he's Seungie. >>

*hands you tissue* Don't cry, ne? D:
Yeah, Junhyung deserved that. Everybody agreed. LOL.

Omonaaaaa~
That continuation of yours. ASDFLKJASDF. Makes me want to continue but. D: School's starting. D:
I'll get to it if I have time. ;D

It's okay! I love your bolded and capped words!♥♥

P.S. Yeah. Lazy to log out from my RP journal. Lazy bum ish me.

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cindyxmc September 12 2010, 18:27:39 UTC
yes he is, he's hate-able in almost all fics like these! haha
he's such a playboy/cheater.
and seungie is your bias! so i totally know how that feels.

LOL write it when you can! XD
cause school sucks and it takes up most of our time!

haha it's okay!
i could always know when it's you! haha =D

<3333

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sachiko_mizuki September 12 2010, 13:29:25 UTC
SPOT FOR xanderleach. Just in case you need it, baby. ;D

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xanderleach September 12 2010, 17:16:16 UTC
OF course i would need this<3 thanks bb!
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[The smile on Kikwang's face was there, until the footsteps faded away and the smile faded away too. his knees trembled as he fall onto the floor, hands curling into tight balls as the first drop of tear fall down his face

'Liar. Why must you lie..?']
Oh Kiki... ;____; How is it that i barely started reading this and there was ALREADY a big knot in my throat? :'( how do you do it?? I feel like beating Junnie to a pulp again. You seem to make me want to do that often. XD

BUT DOOJOON PUNCHED HIM! muahahah omg you know how good that felt? I'm so mean.....hehehe. But beside that spasm of joy, the rest had me crying. oh man, you know you're a great writer. i LOVED this so much. WHY didn't i request something like this??? oh well i'm super glad someone else did XD

GREAT job on this bb, im going to my little corner now and sob eternally for poor Kiki..and maybe smirk endlessly for bloody-lipped Junnie. *hands you cookies* they're chocolate chip<3333333333333333333

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prettyboy_seung September 12 2010, 17:20:56 UTC


I don't know either. XD I like making Junnie the bastard in the stories. ;__; Even though I love him. >>

I know right? I feel so pleased at that myself. :P Thank you!! Your comment never fails to make me smile!♥ Don't worry, I like your prompt. It's awesome and I'll get to it later. LOL. School's starting in 5hours and I haven't sleep. D:

Don't go there forever! I need you!! ;A;
YAY! Cookies! *nomnomnom*
♥♥♥

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sachiko_mizuki September 12 2010, 13:30:02 UTC
AND AS USUAL. SPOT FOR muffledd. <3

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muffledd September 15 2010, 10:29:16 UTC
Yay ! Spot !
Daw, I love it !
It's sad :C
Love Junseung but the happy Kiki shouldnt deserve this at all.
Doojoon is jjang here ! Haha so nice of him~
Seungie is also pitiful here , I guess he should be feeling real guilty.

This fic is awesome&you are awesome too!
Yeah I'm slow again but school really sucks , although I have only gone 1 day since school starts. :/
O lvl sucks more D:
But you don't <3

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sachiko_mizuki September 15 2010, 11:01:11 UTC
Kiki deserved a happy ending, everybody agrees. ;A;
Doojoon is thy man. >:3
XD Of course. I purposely add that in so that people will pity him. :P

>.<
:O No wonder I didn't see you around. Haha, it's a miracle that the internet is so small yet our school is so big. XD
Ikr. T^T
Thank you~ You rock too~ ;D

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muffledd September 15 2010, 11:16:27 UTC
Hehe ! Seungie bias ppl wouldn't let other ppl hate him~
It's just in the blood.

Haha ! Yeah !
It supposingly should be that the Internet is so big , school is so small .
Yet for us is the other way round.
Well, I did see you ytd in the canteen~

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x_heartbeatss_x September 12 2010, 13:57:37 UTC
First! Except for yr spots ofcourse xD
This was really sad but beatiful! ^^
Loved this <33333.

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sachiko_mizuki September 12 2010, 13:59:47 UTC
Wow. You're fast! XD

Dawww! Thank you for reading!♥

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akinoyui September 12 2010, 14:26:29 UTC
poor kwangie... damn u junhyung! (although i love junseung...)
at least doojoon was there for kikwang...
too many sad fics.. it's breaking my heart but this is aweseme bb~

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sachiko_mizuki September 12 2010, 14:33:46 UTC
Haha, there won't be any fluff from me anytime soon. >>;

Thank you for reading!♥

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