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saberivojo

New fic Cow-Tipping

Oct 05, 2009 00:32

Title: Cow Tipping
Author: Saberivojo
Characters: John, Teen!Sam, Teen!Dean
Warnings/Rating: Gen.Some potty mouth...PG-13
Summary: Summer in Cow Country. Not a damn ghost in sight.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Not getting paid. Just like playing with the boys. No cows were harmed during the writing of said fic.
Prompt:
tanpopo03 asked for the below prompt and ( Read more... )

teen!chester, pre-series, john and the boys

Comments 31

kimmer1227 October 5 2009, 12:11:20 UTC

Loved it, Debs!

Oh the joys of trouble free boys. The boys of summer, indeed.

Give it a quick read thru. You left your beta notes in there.

saberivojo October 5 2009, 16:14:37 UTC

Is it fixed? I only found one but maybe there is more?

kimmer1227 October 5 2009, 16:20:44 UTC

Missed this one.

“Sam, Sam…Don’t you want to even know about it?” [Yes! Much better! Plus we get a side order of pissy, prissy Sammy!]

saberivojo October 5 2009, 16:28:03 UTC

Hee hee. Got it. Dumb and dumber. Thanks sweeetie!

patita_fea October 5 2009, 16:13:57 UTC

Bwaha! Rural Winchesters for the win. And it feels so good to see Sam and Dean comfortable with each other, tossing insults and pillows. *smishes them*

saberivojo October 5 2009, 16:15:53 UTC

I miss the boys being boys. Thanks. Comfortable feels good.

tanpopo03 October 5 2009, 17:14:35 UTC

Yay! :D
Thanks so much for writing this for me! I love the atmosphere of summer and how carefree they both seemed.
Cow tipping... lmao. Kinda serves Dean right though that he got the bull instead eheheh. And I can sympathise with Sam. Relatives of mine own a farm and I was there once when a calf was born. URGH. I'm not farmer material!
This made me smile - thanks again! *huggles*

saberivojo October 5 2009, 20:18:58 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the prompt too. It was fun to write. I don't mind the birthin' of cows but it is kind of yucky!!

kjfri October 5 2009, 19:44:43 UTC

Ahhhhh. Midwestern life. Does it get any better? Stupendous job.

saberivojo October 5 2009, 20:19:35 UTC

Thanks. I am glad you liked it. Makes me want to move to Iowa or something!

brigid_tanner October 5 2009, 23:32:06 UTC

Oh, that was FUN! Nice to see the boys just being boys and getting along and teasing each other and having fun being together. Great snark. Love Dean's admiration of girls with little clothing, and Sam getting squeamish about a cow giving birth. It's a different kind of gross than what he'd seen before.

Spotted one typo: Dean liked to thing that it was because there was no school. I think Dean was thinking ;)

saberivojo October 5 2009, 23:50:01 UTC

Thank God somebody is looking out for me!! Thanks for the tip. I will fix it. I am glad it was fun. For some reason, I keep writing stuff that is just the brothers being brothers. I don't know why I love it so much. Maybe because we get so much angst and misery on a daily basis, that I enjoy reading the day to day stuff. So if no one wants to write it, voila! I will and just chill with it.

One of these days maybe I will branch out and do a case fic or something. They just seem to hard and involved for my brain to handle.