Comments | sabaceanbabe: BSG fic: A Level of Trust (nc-17)

sabaceanbabe

BSG fic: A Level of Trust (nc-17)

May 16, 2006 17:35

A Level of Trust
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 1700+
Pairing: Kara/Helo (implied Kara/Lee, Kara/Anders, and Helo/Sharon)
Spoilers: for Scar
Author’s note: This is an AU fic written for laytoncolt. Happy belated birthday! :D Thank you, lee_in_limbo for the beta. I hope you enjoy that now a little more since you’ve finally seen the show!

( The tip of her nose was numb and her lips tingled at the touch of the glass, but nothing so far had dulled the ache inside. )

my bsg fic, my bsg fic: s2, my fic

Comments 62

lizardbeth_j May 16 2006, 22:23:27 UTC

I cannot believe I'm the first to feedback on this -- bizarre! But early bird gets the worm and all that...

Well, I like Kara. And I like Helo. You've got both down. And I can see Kara/Helo in a sort of "friends with benefits" way, so this fit perfectly in that. Helo being smart was a great little tidbit. I'm not sure I ever actually put the timeline in Scar together properly in my head, but this felt like it fit in there, so good job!

sabaceanbabe May 17 2006, 02:23:56 UTC

Thanks, hon. :)

Kara/Helo isn't everyone's cup of tea, so I really don't expect all that much feedback on this one.

lyssie May 16 2006, 23:58:15 UTC

Whoot! *dances about madly*

Kara and Helo and Angst. And then the sex. But the sex is almost secondary to their friendship and understanding of each other AND YAY.

*pauses* That was slightly incoherent. Sorry.

I really like this, and, and, Kara thinking about what Sharon said and calling her a Cylon is perfect.

MWAH.

sabaceanbabe May 17 2006, 02:25:26 UTC

Hee. I love incoherent feedback. It's just the funnest. ;)

lvp3 May 17 2006, 01:06:21 UTC

kara/helo was my first bsg ship. i like very much the friends with benefits idea/theory. :)

you captured them well, i think.

sabaceanbabe May 17 2006, 02:26:44 UTC

Thanks, man! :D

Heh. You and I always seem to find the alternaships, ay..

lvp3 May 17 2006, 03:03:10 UTC

ay. we're wacked that way. LOL

weissman May 17 2006, 02:43:55 UTC

While I think you got Helo and Kara down cold, and I truly believe that at one point Kara and Helo were friends with benefits I still think that once Helo has Sharon, he wouldn't cheat on her with anybody even Kara. Even if Kara needed somebody, I think he would be with her, he would hold her, he would let her cry on his shoulder or beat him up if that's what it took, but I think thats all he would do. I think at this point Sharon is his world, his life. Compeling read, and very hot by the way.

Just got back from Santa Fe NM, we drove and walked around and had dinner in a wonderful Spanish restaurant.

Bob

sabaceanbabe May 17 2006, 02:48:53 UTC

A Spanish restaurant in Santa Fe sounds wonderful, Bob! Yum.

And I frakkin' *knew* I forgot to put something in the author's notes on this -- you just reminded me. AU, babe. AU. I'm not so convinced that Sharon is Helo's entire life as you are, but yeah, I don't honestly think he'd be sleeping around on her, despite the fics I've been writing about it. ;)

weissman May 17 2006, 22:32:27 UTC

They way the written the character to date, at least I believe she is his life, his world, in the way that any person can be anothers life or world.

The spanish restuarant was wonderful even it was a bit pricy, it was worth evey penny. I will post photos when I get back

Bob

pumahmistress May 17 2006, 13:35:28 UTC

THAT was pure love to read. I love how Kara and Karl interact with each other and this was wonderfully written <3<3

sabaceanbabe May 17 2006, 14:44:50 UTC

*preens*

Thank you so much! :D

Heh. I've got this... thing in my brain that says, 10 years down the road, Helo and Kara are the only two left standing, and they're together... Weird, huh? ;)