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Hunger Games ficlet: All That Remains (pg)

Sep 30, 2013 14:39

Title: All That Remains
Rating: PG
Word count: 600
Beta thanks: deathmallow
Characters: Annie Cresta, Johanna Mason
Setting: during Mockingjay in District 13
Prompt: Annie's reaction to finding out she's pregnant. - soamazinghere on Tumblr

( Annie had been feeling queasy off and on for days, but when Coin told her he was gone, that’s when she lost what little had been in her stomach. )

my hunger games fic, my fic

Comments 6

rose_griffes September 30 2013, 21:31:08 UTC

*sob*

Nicely done with the descriptiveness of this short piece.

sabaceanbabe October 2 2013, 16:18:04 UTC

Thank you! *hands you a tissue to dry your eyes*

mathgirl24 October 1 2013, 00:23:21 UTC

That was beautiful. Terribly sad, but beautiful.

sabaceanbabe October 2 2013, 16:18:26 UTC

Thank you! ♥

lorata October 3 2013, 06:25:55 UTC

Ouuuuuch.

“No. It’s not in my head.” She feels something almost like panic rise inside her. “It’s not all in my head.”

gahhh of course she'd think they were trying to convince her she's crazy again :( :( :(

I do like how you write Annie's POV, it feels very real to me. It's damaged but still human, and idk I don't have the words for it right now but I like it.

sabaceanbabe October 4 2013, 01:46:20 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad it works for you. :)