Comments | sabaceanbabe: BSG fic: Letting Go (nc-17)

sabaceanbabe

BSG fic: Letting Go (nc-17)

Jan 09, 2006 22:03

Title: Letting Go ( Read more... )

Comments 74

iynx January 10 2006, 03:35:41 UTC

You totally channelled Helo in this!

A bemused smile on his handsome face, he asked, “What’re you doing, Mags?”

She smiled up at him as she slipped an arm around his waist, felt the roughness of the bandages that helped to stabilize the broken ribs Starbuck had mentioned. “I’m invading your space.”

I can totally see this happening, but as we all know Helo has sexual chemistry with just about anything.

Dialogue was spot on, pacing was good and I like that it's only NC17 because of the last few paragraphs and it was "not forever".

so his excuse to Sharon will be "but I thought we were on a break" right?

sabaceanbabe January 10 2006, 03:45:58 UTC

I soooo have this little vignette in my mind where Sharon's all "You slept with her?!" and Helo's all "Sharon, not now!" 'cause they're in a dangerous situation and Racetrack just told Helo she's got his back. :P

iynx January 10 2006, 03:48:58 UTC

love it!

ethnotechno August 27 2007, 16:52:18 UTC

Please please write that! I almost feel like I've overdosed on Helo/Sharon fluff. While I love them and all, I totally wanna see them have a proper marital spat for once :)

Heh heh, Helo in the doghouse...

("You slept with her just because I said I never wanted to see you again and wanted to be airlocked? What kinda human are you....?") :D

iynx January 10 2006, 03:37:04 UTC

oh... and the only reason I didn't comment on Racetrack is I don't know much about her, she hasn't really caught my eye much.

koalathebear January 10 2006, 03:57:47 UTC

Meep! This is really good sbabe, very well written but a little too scarily convincing!! I like the way you didn't try to soften up Racetrack - how she still says stuff she shouldn't say.

An even Darker Ship this be ..... Thanks for sharing!

sabaceanbabe January 10 2006, 04:13:10 UTC

No! There can't be a darker ship than The Dark ShipTM!

Glad you liked it though. Koala's need to be entertained. :)

summer_smile January 10 2006, 04:26:36 UTC

First of all, let me just get this out of the way... OMGYAY! Racetrack fic!

Thank you... there's so little of it around.

Very well written and very in character. I'm a-gonna memory this one.

Thank you again!

- deb

sabaceanbabe January 10 2006, 13:13:20 UTC

It was definitely my pleasure. :P

brendanm720 January 10 2006, 04:26:56 UTC

I liked it.

You've got Helo down, and Racetrack wasn't too far off, either.

Starbuck telling Racetrack what was what was great, too. (and Gaeta Standing guard! Brilliant!)

sabaceanbabe January 10 2006, 13:15:33 UTC

Thanks! :D

My only regret was that I couldn't figure out a way to work more Gaeta into it...

poisontaster January 11 2006, 17:53:47 UTC

Something to aim for next time! We NEED more Gaeta! *g*