bsg fic: Moonshine (nc-17)

[sabaceanbabe]

Moonshine
Author: SabaceanBabe
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 799
Characters: Helo/Sharon
Spoilers: maybe, maybe for Resistance and the Farm
Summary: Gods, he missed her, missed what they’d had…
Disclaimer: BSG isn’t mine, but thank you so much, Mr. Moore, for letting me play in your sandbox.
Author’s note: Written for poisontaster, ‘cause she stumped me with a

Comments

[shadowserenity]

Mmm, sbabe fic! I think my eyes are actually watering - in joy, probably! That was awesome, sbabe. Really, really awesome. I love how Helo didn't want her to admit that she loved him quite yet before he *literally* wrapped himself around the idea.

Ah, Helo/Boomer sex, that brings us back to our fandom home :D. I've always love your prose, sbabe. Thank you.

[sabaceanbabe]

Thank you, Amsie. *hug*

There was just this progression in my mind for him: in KLG he's all "I don't love you; I loved what I thought was you"; in this (and thus the Farm) he's all "I don't know how I feel"; in Home he's all "I love you" with no more hesitation. :)

[weissman]

That makes so much sense !!!

Bob

[poisontaster]

I am repaid many times over. This is...wow. Hot, angsty, perfect. I have to make you lose bets more often! 8)

[sabaceanbabe]

Yay! She liked it! And again I say... Yay!

After I decided on the setting, it pretty much wrote itself, you know. :P

[lee_in_limbo]

Strong narrative here. I don't recall you writing sex scenes in any detail before now (although that scene in the cottage between these two a few months ago is just vague enough in my head that I can't remember how it went... may have to reread). You did so very tastefully. I hope you enjoyed writing it, darling. I know how much you've been enjoying writing the tension between these two. Hopefully writing them actually getting it on is cathartic.

If nothing else, I hope it made climbing into bed interesting. ;)

Nice work.

L o L,
thoughtful

[sabaceanbabe]

Well, this is, I think, my 4th or 5th attempt at the ol' nc-17 rating. And yes, The Honey Trap to which you refer is one of the other, earlier attempts. I believe you called that one "saucy." :)

[lee_in_limbo]

*grin* I'm falling behind. I knew I was. I missed the last few pieces you did. I'll have to go back and do some catching up.

L o L,
fanboy

[sabaceanbabe]

And that is where the tags on LJs come in handy. All of my recent stuff can be found by clicking on "my fic" in the original post. :)

Just trying to help.

[thekatebeyond]

I could eat this with a spoon! It's exactly what we needed - something to fill in the space between Sharon showing up again, and she and Helo clearly having resolved their issues. It's a shame they didn't give us any of that in the episode, but this fills in the blank nicely.

[sabaceanbabe]

Thank you, ma'am. :)

Hee. I guess that's what fanfic is all about, huh? Answering all those otherwise unanswered questions.

[thekatebeyond]

Are you crazy? It's all about the porn! Answering the lingering questions is just a nice side-benefit.

*g*

[chasarumba]

"Smut" is such an oversimplified term for fic that is rich with emotion like this one, that just *happens* to also include a little sumpin' sumpin'...*grin* I enjoyed.

I fear that if I took that color meme, the result would leap off the screen and send me a Howler proclaiming, "Feedback whore!" at terrifying volume :)

[sabaceanbabe]

That's *exactly* what happened to me! Although I think it was "ho" rather than "whore." It was hard to tell at that volume. ;)

Thank you, Chasa.