Comments | sabaceanbabe: BSG fic: Bonding Rituals (pg-13)

sabaceanbabe

BSG fic: Bonding Rituals (pg-13)

Aug 29, 2005 22:55

Bonding RitualsAuthor: SabaceanBabe ( Read more... )

Comments 22

lee_in_limbo August 30 2005, 03:10:43 UTC

“Not at the moment.” Seeing the growing frustration in Anders’ face, Helo relented. “Anders, man, Kara and I are friends. Have been for a lot of years. Have we ever frakked? None of your business. Are we together now? Nope.”

I bust your chops a lot, but you do good work. I especially liked this line. It's male dialogue. You handled it nicely, darling.

L o L,
enjoyed this

sabaceanbabe August 30 2005, 19:39:45 UTC

Thank you, dear. :) *hugs you tight*

lee_in_limbo August 30 2005, 19:42:56 UTC

It'll all come together some day, I suspect.

L o L,
enjoys his hug, reciprocates

raincitygirl August 30 2005, 03:14:46 UTC

This is great. I could totally buy this conversation occurring offscreen. It's a deleted scene, only not.

sabaceanbabe August 30 2005, 19:40:54 UTC

Hee. Thank you! I figured there had to be *something* like that in the background. I mean, they were there for a week or something. :)

dangermousie August 30 2005, 04:00:41 UTC

So. Damn. Good.

sabaceanbabe August 30 2005, 19:41:29 UTC

Thank. You. So. Much. ;)

lyssie August 30 2005, 04:12:18 UTC

*shrieks happily*

The drunk and the Sue-Shaun mocking, and the no jock could out-drink a Colonial pilot, and the conversation. And Kara IS SO GOING TO EAT HIM ALIVE. And he'll love it.

*stops babbling incoherently*

This was wonderful. *sad* I want more. *whines*

sabaceanbabe August 30 2005, 19:42:49 UTC

*covers ears until the shrieking passes*

Hee. You make me laugh.

I'm glad you liked it, chica.

un4scene August 30 2005, 18:20:30 UTC

It's so nice to see Helo be fun and snarky again. Much too much with the serious lately. Fav line:

“Not at the moment.”

:D That's my boy!

sabaceanbabe August 30 2005, 19:43:51 UTC

Hee. Can't beat fun and snarky.

Glad you liked it, man!