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fic: Two Very Pretty People

Aug 17, 2005 15:55

Two Very Pretty People
Author: SabaceanBabe
Rating: PG
Word count: 665
Characters: Helo/Boomer, Starbuck/Anders, OC
Disclaimer: Battlestar Galactica, this incarnation, belongs to Ron Moore, but he, kind man, said that it was okay if we play in his sandbox, so…
Spoilers: up to ep 2.05
( Malachi knew he stared, but he didn’t care. )

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dangermousie August 17 2005, 20:00:56 UTC

Oooh, this is WONDERFUL.

I have a particular weakness for seeing the characters I love through the eyes of a thrid character and this is perfect!

sabaceanbabe August 17 2005, 20:04:28 UTC

OMG! That was fast. O_o I wasn't sure I was done editing my too-fast post and here I already have a comment. :P

Thank you!!!! I'm glad you liked it. It kinda wrote itself while I was at lunch. Hee.

lyssie August 17 2005, 20:05:05 UTC

OMG. Balm for my soul after the sick twistedness of Night Visions.

*clings*

Very nice. =)

sabaceanbabe August 17 2005, 20:11:15 UTC

Hee. Thanks, man. Glad you liked it. :)

lyssie August 17 2005, 23:17:35 UTC

*clings*

plzwritemore.

kitsah August 17 2005, 20:33:42 UTC

Very nice! I love it when we see an OC :). I really wish BSG Caprica hadn't become the Starbuck show so we could know what was going on. Sooo much more interesting than Anders! Oh well, we get it in fic!

sabaceanbabe August 17 2005, 20:50:21 UTC

Glad you liked it! Um, is that vid done yet? I kinda like Anders, though, and I absolutely *adored* the kickass!Helo we got to see in the last couple of eps. Yummy. How 'bout now? Is it done now?

kitsah August 18 2005, 01:27:26 UTC

lol! I got through the first minute or so before I got confused by your lyrics. also there is quite a long instrumental in the beginning so I added some clips. I think it works pretty well but let me know...its your baby! (and not in the helo sense...) I will send what I have to you in the morning wirh some questions.

sabaceanbabe August 17 2005, 20:58:15 UTC

I *know* I replied to this, but it's gone now. O_o Anyway, is that vid done yet? Huh? Huh? Is it? I'm glad you liked it! ;)

repr0b8 August 17 2005, 21:08:12 UTC

Just so perfect. Every sentence. Your style and eloquence blows me away every time.

I love the way you portray Helo never touching, but never more than a couple steps away. And the perfect description of the hug *sigh*.

Thanks again for sharing, sbabe! :D

sabaceanbabe August 17 2005, 21:20:53 UTC

Aw, you're sweet. *blushes, again*

I'm glad you enjoyed it. *blushes some more*

raincitygirl August 17 2005, 22:00:50 UTC

Ooh, I absolutely LOVE the third-party point of view. What a neat way of doing it. And I love how you incorporated Helo's push-pull body language, and Anders hostility mixed with fear. Malachi's vague attraction was also a nice touch. AFter all, he needs a reason to be this attentive to a stranger!

sabaceanbabe August 18 2005, 13:14:15 UTC

Thank you! I had read something earlier in the day that was told in a 3rd-party pov and I guess it stuck with me.

BTW, I love your icon. Is that from Angel?

raincitygirl August 18 2005, 14:14:54 UTC

Yup, it's from Angel, the episode called 'Smile Time' (when Angel gets turned into a puppet). It was made by infinitemonkeys and is shareable if you email him and ask.

sabaceanbabe August 18 2005, 14:19:23 UTC

You know what? I've yet to see an episode of Angel. I'm just about to start S4 Buffy on DVD, so I'll have to get Angel on my list (Blockbuster Online).

By the way, here's that Helo/Boomer shower fic: The Honey Trap. I hope you enjoy it! It's nc-17, so consider yourself warned. ;)

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