Heroes fic: Tiger By the Tail (R for language)

Feb 15, 2008 18:47

Title: Tiger By the Tail
Author: sabaceanbabe
Rating: R for language
Word count: 429
Character: Ted Sprague
Summary: ...gotta get control, gotta get hold of this, can't make it go away...
Author's note: This was written for the 3rd challenge at heroes_contest, write a "drabble" (500 words or less) for the prompt "split." Thank you, ancarett for the beta ( Read more... )

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ancarett February 16 2008, 00:02:56 UTC
You know I like this -- you did a great job of getting inside Ted's head, showing how it wasn't using anger, but control, that allowed him to master what was burning inside.

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sabaceanbabe February 19 2008, 14:59:27 UTC
Thank you so much! Ted really became more dangerous, once he figured out how to use his power, didn't he?

And thank you again for the speedy beta! :D

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mamaboolj February 16 2008, 12:44:53 UTC
Poor Ted - and nice evolution of him in this moment.

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sabaceanbabe February 19 2008, 14:59:53 UTC
Thanks, man. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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buckbeakbabie February 17 2008, 19:06:27 UTC
*is speechless*

Wow. Amazingly effective drabble. Love how you've structured it and how well you paint the picture. I'm in awe. Well done!

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sabaceanbabe February 19 2008, 15:01:07 UTC
*bounce*

I don't think I've ever rendered anyone speechless before! Hee. Thank you so much for the kind words and I'm glad you liked it. :)

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