The Unit fic: Second Guesses and Fools' Errands (pg-13)

[sabaceanbabe]

Title: Second Guesses and Fools' Errands
Author: sabaceanbabe
Rating: PG-13 for language
Word count: 950
Character: Charles “Betty Blue” Grey
Spoilers: for 3.7 “Five Brothers”
Author’s note: Unbetaed. If anyone wants to take a stab at it, feel free. I’m always open for suggestions and improvement. This was written for jebbypal, ‘cause she’s awesome.

Comments

[jebbypal]

Oh my god!!!! You have me crying. And finally, unit fic from you!!! *huggles you and your muse* So glad I checked my flist before getting in the shower to start my errands. Soo glad.

This is great really - love the little pieces of backstory you give the two of them.

One little comment - not criticism really, just my brain working as I read it - when you said Grey welcomed the pain from his stitches - that had to be hell for him while healing. I mean every bit of pain from every wound that Hector had worked on as he'd struggled to save Grey. A reminder from every bit of left over tightness every time he heals. Oh god, the scars that the bartender will kiss/touch when they get together (and god I still hate her character - the writers got soooo lazy with her. Like they just intended the entire season to consist of building up something about Hector to be left over to torment Grey with - as if that was even necessary given their closeness).

LOVED EVERY SECOND OF THIS AND YOU MUST WRITE MORE UNIT FIC!!1 :) Or make some good icons. :) Or both.. :)

[jebbypal]

BTW, if you want to cross post this to a community, beforeyouwrite has been a good place for small fandoms - that's where LD and I have been posting ours since there's not really a viable unit fic comm.

[sabaceanbabe]

Yay! She likes it! *bounce*

I never even thought of that in regard to the pain, but yeah, that makes sense.