Fic: Lost Years | DCU | Clark/Bruce | PG-13 | 2/18

[saavikam77]

Title: Lost Years - Part 2
Fandom: DCU
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Rating: NC-17 (overall); PG-13 (this section)
Word Count: 1,867 (this section)
Prompt: For the World's Finest Gift Exchange, #F46: Batman and Superman are stranded on a lonely planet and are lost for years before returning home. What happens? Universe is writer's choice.
Summary: (this

Comments

[ladybugkay]

I was wondering how you were going to sabotage their escape plans. LOL

My, you have put them in quite the predicament, haven't you? Poor Clark nearly suffocating and not even sure if he was successful in his mission, and Bruce trying to comfort him while raging silently to himself. Those poor, poor boys.

At least they have each other. And lots of time for sex without interruption. *g*

[saavikam77]

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *evil, maniacal grin* ^_^ Had to come up with *some* way to strand them there more or less permanently. :p For Clark, I really have been wanting to show that he just can't go too far in space without air. He'll just be a *little* traumatized. *hugs them both*

And yes... *plenty* of time to get it on.... ^_~ Hehehehe...

Thanks!!

[greeneyelove]

I like that they are depending on one another. And Bruce isn't being pain in the ass Bat Stubborn. I'm actually proud of him.

The last line broke my heart, by the way.

[saavikam77]

Thanks. They are definitely going to need to come together if they're going to get through this. Glad you like my Bruce here. Without a cave to hide in or a cowl to hide behind anymore, there isn't much reason to be a jack-ass. :p

*hugs them both* I just couldn't help that line. Glad it hit the mark.

[starsandsea]

*huggles Clark and Bruce* Oh noes!!! Poor Clark and Bruce, so close, but so far... Meeep!

I hope there's more soon!

[saavikam77]

They need the hugs. O_O Poor boys.

More coming tomorrow. Thanks!! ^_^

[carolandtom]

Poor Clark! It must have been a dreadful experience to him to be that far away from the planet while the air was leaking out from the tank. Now they don't know if they can expect help of any sort. A hard situation that makes for great story telling, such as the one you deliver in this really interesting chapter.

I hope you can post part 3 soon. I'm totally hooked!

[saavikam77]

I wanted to show more of what Clark experienced out there, but then there wouldn't have been any suspense to it. :p But yeah, terrifying for him, since he didn't have any other air supply.

The next few parts are going to be pretty hard on the boys.

Thanks so much!! :D

[bradygirl_12]

Excellent second chapter, Saavi!

Both boys are unused to being able to save themselves or others, and to be close to helpless on this world. They also have to face being marooned and their loved ones left behind, and trying to adjust to this new world.

It's tough to be in a world with only two people! :) Good for closeness, but if one gets sick or hurt, the other will go even crazier than usual!

[saavikam77]

Thank you so much!!

I think they really just don't know how to give up or depend on others to save them. And being alone, yeah, it's gonna be a *huge* adjustment.

And, oh, there *will* be injuries and illness.... *evil grin* ^_^

[bradygirl_12]

And, oh, there *will* be injuries and illness.... *evil grin* ^_^

Well, of course. ;)