Superman: Aftermath - Chapter 7

[saavikam77]

Title: Superman: Aftermath
Author: Saavikam77
Fandom: Superman Returns
Pairings: Lois/Richard, Clark/Lois
Rating - This Chapter: PG-13
Summary: In the days following the events of Superman Returns, both Clark and Lois are reeling from events that have changed their lives forever, and the city of Metropolis is in shambles. Things only get worse as

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[saavikam77]

-childish giggle- I keep things in my belt. It's what I do.

Hehe... Every good woman needs a utility belt! :p

hehehe I like that description. I am liking this new character. If she turns out to be "important" I'll like her and if this is just a vignette I'll be impressed at the time you took on her.

Oh cool! A very refreshing take on a Superman to the rescue kind of moment to come from the "day players" side of things! Can't wait to see how ti unfolds!

Wow. I've known her for five seconds and I already care about her. Hold on girl! Supes is on his way!

Glad you liked the way I handled the characters here. It just seemed like something that has been missing from Superman stories - the human side of things, the people that are affected. Sara was my first OC victim of the story, so I felt I needed to put something extra into her and her coworkers.

VERY awesome descriptions. And the cutting back and forth so much really adds to the tension.

That's going to happen *a lot* when we get into the action part of the story, and Clark has to battle *clamps hand over mouth* *muffled noises*...

^_~

So heartbreaking to see his internal thoughts as he is saving people. No matter how strong and fast, he can't always save everyone...

That will continue to be a factor as things go from bad to worse in Metropolis. O_O

-wipes tear- Just heartbreaking....

::bows:: ^_^