Comments | saas_ouen: Alliance - Chapter 1/Dalton Mafia fic

saas_ouen

Alliance - Chapter 1/Dalton Mafia fic

Jul 05, 2011 13:28

Dalton mafiaverse; Kurt enlists the protection of local organized crime thugs when the stress he's enduring at school bleeds into his family life. Potential squicks - gun usage, violence, Blaine being in his late twenties while Kurt is still a teenager.

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blaqkheaven July 5 2011, 17:47:23 UTC

:DDDDDD I am already RIDICULOUSLY intrigued (this is thehovercraft, btw) and I cannot WAIT for more of this.
I'm fascinated by the world you've built and I have a feeling you're barely even started.

saas_ouen July 5 2011, 18:42:29 UTC

Y'all are friggin' fantastic motivators, you know that? Also, TAKE SOME CREDIT. I flipped back to those photo manips at LEAST five times for inspiration.

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saas_ouen July 5 2011, 18:41:40 UTC

EEE, thank you! Hopefully I'll be able to keep up with it - somehow, this took less than 24 hours, and I NEVER finish anything in less than 24 hours! I have good feelings.

rrrowr July 5 2011, 18:27:36 UTC

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY.

So when you say AU, you mean AU. Like it has the elements of canon but this is absolutely a different world. Dalton is not what I'd assumed you'd have it, though yes it is a front. And Blaine is absolutely delightful already and you know what I'm reminded of? Oddly, Kung Fu Hustle's gang leader -- minus the sort of crazy mind set, but still with the dancing if he wants to and the potential for a bizarre enjoyment in clean, absolute solutions. And Kurt's fragility, too, was wonderful to read. He really is like fractured crystal around a ball of steel.

Yes, definitely liking this. Out of interest, are you making this Klaine, eventually, or keeping it as gen? If going Klaine -- or any other ship, really -- any thoughts as to how you might do that?

saas_ouen July 5 2011, 18:40:40 UTC

I've never seen that! I'm probably going to watch it within the week just for the -suggestion- of comparison. :P And, yes, total AU. I don't even know what -I- was expecting when I got it started, but . . . HERE IT IS.

I'm glad you like it! Though, lord, I'd wish I'd given it one more run through before throwing it at people. SPOTTED FOUR MISTAKES TO CORRECT. Balls, Ro. Balls.

saas_ouen July 5 2011, 18:45:11 UTC

Oh, also, I have no idea. My inclination is to Klaine the shit out of it, because. . . do I even need to say how much I love age gaps? And strong older men and sassy younger boys, plus then you add guns and it's all just OH. But, precisely the problem would be your second question - I have no IDEA how I'd work that in.

tinak_47 July 5 2011, 23:27:37 UTC

This is toomuchgawking and I LOOOVE IT HOLY FUCKING CRAP.
Age gap, and Blaine liking Kurt because he's pretty much defenseless but willing to go out and work to change that, and hnnggg.
Love.

snarkygirl101 July 6 2011, 03:16:23 UTC

ksjdfkjf YOU WROTE IT! <3 I'm so happy, no lie. Just.... Dalton Mafia is like a new favorite for me, omigosh. I love what you has so far, can't wait for more.