The Gentleman Acquisitors (written for shardaunei)

Sep 18, 2014 21:02

Title: The Gentleman Acquisitors
Pairing/Group: Sho + Aiba friendship, Sakumoto, Ohno, Nino
Rating/Warnings: PG, no warnings apply
Summary: Aiba Masaki is the galaxy’s worst treasure hunter, and once again Sakurai Sho must come to his friend’s rescue. But has Aiba gone too far this time?
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r: pg, sakuraiba, #2014

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sa_shipper September 18 2014, 19:02:59 UTC
Sparkling spot for shardaunei

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shardaunei September 19 2014, 16:05:48 UTC
Wow, that was awesome. I just... wow. Thank you so much. It's exactly what I wanted: funny, inside jokes galore, references, Oguri Shun, Yoko. It's like you know me so well. Whoever you are, writer-chan, we are kindred spirits. haha.

I still giggle over "Dome Yoji". Clever use of the word. Love it. Haha. Nino swinging in ala Indiana Jones, breaking the window to grab "the precious ring" just to save his bff.

Sho gave Aiba a slight push in the direction of his ship. “Now behave yourself. I don’t want to see you again for a long time.”

Aiba turned to look back at him, his eyes filling with tears and Sho knew he’d made a bad choice of words. He shook his head, holding up his hands in apology.

“I meant in this sort of situation! I’m trying to say don’t get in trouble so I have to come get you out.”

Aiba wiped his tears. It had apparently been an emotional week for him. “I’ll do my best, I promise!”Famous last words, Aiba-chan. lol ( ... )

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astrangerenters October 11 2014, 18:38:20 UTC
Hi, I'm so happy you liked this! I had a lot of fun figuring out where all of Arashi could fit in this story. I'm still laughing about "Dome Yoji" myself because it's so ridiculous :)

I didn't want the story to have a Sho and Jun seduction scene since it's still technically the Sakuraiba Exchange. I hope there was enough of their silly friendship to make it worthwhile!

Thank you, I'm so glad it was something you could enjoy!

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shardaunei October 11 2014, 20:55:25 UTC
Ah! I had this feeling it was you. I don't know. Maybe it was because it's well-written and super funny.
I totally understand about the Sakumoto. It's still great, though, so it's cool. Thanks again for the awesome fic.

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perkyandproud September 20 2014, 06:43:36 UTC
Okay, that was awesome. Even if it took me far too long to get the joke...Dome Yoji. *headdesk*

I do love me some science fiction and this was delightful! :)

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astrangerenters October 11 2014, 18:36:33 UTC
Haha, Dome Yoji is one of the worst jokes of all time isn't it? :)

Thank you!

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perkyandproud October 11 2014, 19:57:04 UTC
Ah, but I love bad puns, so it was great! LOL

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astrangerenters October 11 2014, 18:36:45 UTC
Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it :)

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