Behind the Sex - Chapter 24

[s2_otter]

Title: Behind the Sex
Fandom(s) : U-KISS
Pairing(s): KeMaru
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, Romance

Warnings: Awful!English
Author's Notes: My second NaNoWriMo, and a rather bold decision, if I might say :)! Hopefully doesn't contain too much inaccuracies, and if it does, please ignore it? >_>?

Comments

[astraldreamz]

Lol, this has to be one of my favourite chapters soo far ~ . Kevin finally sort of comes into realization ^^.

"Yet, even the sweetest mango ice dessert couldn’t overcome the bitterness in Kevin’s heart."
-This was the most bitter line ever . Well, besides the part when Kevin and Kibum ignored each other.

[s2_otter]

Is it? I'm glad :D!
Haha, yeah ^^

Wahh, haha, it was a cheesy line, I'm glad you thought that way XD!
Thanks for commenting~ <3

[ext_681672]

THIS UPDATE CAME SO LATE. >(

Anyway, this is so depressing to read.

And the female escort is so damn weird omg. If I were in the car with her I woulsd probably freak out. Didnt you cringe when you wrote this? Lol.

Ugh, the scene where Kevin and Kibum walked past each others like strangers. Ouch, my heart. :'(

Eli's character is so confusing. He's nice, then he's not, then he's nice again. Hmmmm.

[s2_otter]

I'M SORRY.
I DIDN'T SAY IT WOULD COME ONE WEEK AFTER Y'KNOW.
I said I would update when I have time :3.

It's okay, we both know you're a sadist.

I kinda did, but I was more of pitying her cause of her job.
Y'know, kinda like imagining her as Kevin but Kevin's less vocal about his problems LOL.

Mine too /duct tapes it all up

He's spoilt, HAHHAH get it? :3
Not intentional in the story though, he's just supposed to be mean and nice only when he feels slightly bad for treating Kevin like a good.

Thanks for commenting~!

[ext_681672]

PSH, BUT YOU HAVE ALL YOUR BACKUP CHAPTERS JUST WAITING TO BE PUBLISHED! Doesn't take much time you know.

And hey what, since when am I a sadist!!

NO I DON'T GET IT, WHAT WHAT WHAT.

[s2_otter]

I need to reply comments, take half an hour you know LOL

IDK HAHAHA YOU GIVE OFF A SADIST VIBE

He's spoilt, like malfunctioned HAHAHAHA

[s2_otter]

Slightly, but not fully haha.

Yep, sometimes it takes time for the tempo to suddenly sink in and someone realise that they are out of sync.

HAHAHAHHAHA, Kibum's better than that~~!

YOU'RE EATING ICE-CREAM?!
WHERE'S MY SHARE!
/demands/

Lol, soon, soon~
Thank you for commenting!

[s2_otter]

Yay! :DD

Waha, I'm gonna control my desire for ice-cream then :D