Behind the Sex - Chapter 11

Jan 09, 2012 01:24

Title: Behind the Sex
Fandom(s) : U-KISS
Pairing(s): KeMaru
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, Romance

Warnings: Awful!English
Author's Notes: My second NaNoWriMo, and a rather bold decision, if I might say :)! Hopefully doesn't contain too much inaccuracies, and if it does, please ignore it? >_>?

This man’s future, Kibum wanted to protect it. )

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ext_681672 January 8 2012, 17:33:01 UTC
SPOT.
PRAISE ME FOR MY EFFICIENCY.

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s2_otter January 8 2012, 17:47:01 UTC
/PRAISES.

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ext_681672 January 8 2012, 17:51:21 UTC
"Kevin just took the hotel room card out of its holder while keeping the money in his pocket." Is that supposed to hint that Kevin is less concerned about the money now?

AND AH FUCK. OMG SORRY I COULDN'T HELP BUT CURSE AT THIS CHAPTER. OMG BREAKING POINT BREAKING POINT. ITS LIKE SO ASDFGHJKLKJHGFDSA (hyperventilates)

I can imagine how heartbreaking that scene was, seeing someone getting raped in front of you, yet you can't do a single thing about it. Omg, poor Kevin, forever getting raped. THAT MAN SHOULD BE HANGED, THE ONLY PERSON THAT CAN RAPE KEVIN IS KIBUM. Of course, them 2 having sex with each other willingly is better)

So after being through all that, Kevin is hardened/numb now? And so he's trying to forget his past?

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s2_otter January 9 2012, 01:15:17 UTC
Uh, I can't remember.
I think it means he doesn't count it because it's routine though LOL.

It's okay, I'll give you the right to curse :3.
I think the rape was horribly written though ._."

Yeah, and Kibum was only 7, it must have impacted him a lot :O.
HAHAHA, well, it doesn't make sense for him to choose to be a prostitute, could it? So he must have been forced :3
HAHA, willingly~!

Maybe. He's not trying to forget his past, he's trying to forget Woo Sunghyun. :3
Thanks for commenting!

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drippingillu January 8 2012, 19:55:43 UTC
i did not expect that "^"

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s2_otter January 9 2012, 01:15:34 UTC
Of course I wouldn't let you expect it :P
Thanks for commenting!

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astraldreamz January 8 2012, 21:53:34 UTC
"Fishy, way too fishy."
ROFL did you do that on purpose?

TAT Poor Kevin... Kibum's blaming himself now... sigh.... I have a feeling that Kibum's not going to tell Kevin what he remembers... There's no reason to, except to bring back those painful memories.
I wonder how Kibum will face Kevin now...
I'm on the verge of crying... poor Kevin and Kibum. Can't believe Kibum saw something like that when he was only 7. And Kevin had to go through that when he was 6....

Dam, you serious? I thought you just randomly stuck songs in those trailers.... Wow...

O.O You updated this chapter soo early today. Its usually around night time when this get posted ^^.

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s2_otter January 9 2012, 01:17:13 UTC
As a matter of fact, I did XD

Haha, trust your feelings :P
They're right XD
Aw, don't cry, /cuddles.
Sometimes that's just when most rapes occur :S

HAHA, I DIDN'T!
Lol, it was to round the whole story up, including the emotional turmoil aha.

It was midnight when I posted, that's why XD

Thanks for commenting!

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astraldreamz January 9 2012, 05:30:27 UTC
But, you really did mean it when you said that we'll find out Kevin's story soon xD. I was actually wrong again.
This was my guess:
I thought that Kevin had an abusive father. Then I thought that he might have a sick mother that he had to take care of.. that's why he has to go out and work. But rofl, that doesn't make sense now that I think about it. Oh well, I'm always wrong LOL. I really didn't expect those two to have met beforehand...

TAT You really need to stop saying "thanks for commenting"

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s2_otter January 9 2012, 14:16:46 UTC
Haha, of course I meant it XD
Hm, that might have been possible but it's not dire enough a situation to let him think of being a prostitute XD
And I've used the concept of abusive father in Complementary Differences so I didn't want to reuse it :3.

Aww, but it's heartfelt thanks, and a little of a standard procedure.
Otherwise I don't know how to end my replies ;~;
<3

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s2_otter January 9 2012, 01:22:28 UTC
Did something happen? :O
No problem~

Sunghyun issss a cute name but when I put Sunghyun to Kevin I cannot see the link LOLOLOL.
But I have a feeling U-KISS calls him Sunghyun behind the scenes because they call Eli Kyungjae too.

Kibum ~has~ always been that way :D

He is smart, afterall :D. And technology is such that he sees vague mentions of it on TV :D
Aw, /cuddles you, I'm a bad woman but why else would Kevin choose to be a prostitute? Exactly because he doesn't have a choice :P

DRAMAS ALWAYS HAVE RAPE ;~;, don't be worried ROFLROFL.
It's vague mentions duhhhh.

Of course not, why would Kevin get mad if...Kibum never speaks of it :P

I'm not a genius but aww, :3 The industry isn't all sunflower and puppies, is it? :P
If Kibum hadn't meet him then, Kevin would never have told, so yeah, Kibum is ultimately the only one who coud save him.

ROFLROFL. You may have my autograph /SIGNS HUGELY BECAUSE THAT'S HOW SUPERSTARS DO IT/
#likeaboss

HAHAH, thank you! <3
(And for reading. And for commenting.) :33

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sweetichigo227 January 9 2012, 00:17:06 UTC
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MY POOR KEVIN! HE WAS RAPED!! *cries* I HATE THAT MAN D:< Poor Kevin having to be sold to this life by that, that, that, there are no words for that awful man to explain how much I hate him. My poor baby :'(

That must have hurt Kibum when he found out that the guy that he likes was the poor little boy that was raped that he wanted to help so badly. :(

Awesome update tho! Even though it made me sad

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s2_otter January 9 2012, 01:24:53 UTC
Aww, /hugs you tightly.
Yes he was, and that man was his uncle! D<

Obviously it did, but, what could he do other than look forward? :3
No more looking backwards~~

Thank you for commenting~
/gives you cookies :D!

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