Behind the Sex - Chapter 8

[s2_otter]

Title: Behind the Sex
Fandom(s) : U-KISS
Pairing(s): KeMaru
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, Romance

Warnings: Awful!English
Author's Notes: My second NaNoWriMo, and a rather bold decision, if I might say :)! Hopefully doesn't contain too much inaccuracies, and if it does, please ignore it? >_>?

Comments

[ext_681672]

AM I FIRST.

[s2_otter]

Lol yes.

[ext_681672]

Kevin was all cutesy and fluffy but then he suddenly said "fuck me" and ruined everything lol.

"Kibum looked close to a dead log right now." What a... sad scene LOL. Poor Kevin, still not getting any reactions.

KIBUM WHY DO YOU WANT TO SMELL KEVNI'S... HAHAHAHAHA OMG SO EPIC. KEVIN'S REACTION IS EPIC X2.

And how do YOU know that cum tastes like a mixture of bitterness and saltiness huh?

KEVIN IS ANGRY. THAT MEANS HE CARES. AW. ^^

[ext_681672]

AW YEAH, I'M FIRST #LIKEABOSS

[anonymous]

I love your fic. At first I thought it's gonna be very disgusting and vulgar but it's good, really good. I love how the sex scene are always different, it's never boring. You really know how to develops Kevin's feelings, it's neither slow or too quick, it's perfect.
And FINALLY Kevin is angry, I hope he'll ignore Kibum.
I can't wait for the next chapter, it's gonna be interesting.

And oh, sorry for my mistakes but english is not my native language.

[s2_otter]

Thank you :D, I'm really thankful for your love.
Yep, I guess it's unevitable with that sort of title ^^"
Thank you for liking it and for all your compliments! I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^
Haha, will he? :P

Thanks for the comment! And no worries, your English is perfectly fine, save for a little grammar confusion, but I can understand you perfectly and would even think you just had some typos ^^
<3
Thank you once more! :D

[s2_otter]

/countdown to the new year where someone promised a certain story :3

^^ Angst~ :3
But really, yep, Kevin has no choice lol.
It's not what he chooses, it's what Kibum decides.
Sadly.

Awwwww, they will :3.
Because I love you, I let you in on that little spoiler :P

Thanks for commenting!

[s2_otter]

OF COURSE I AM WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT ;~~~;
I'VE WAITED ONE YEAR AND TWO MONTHS ;~~~;

SHOW ME THAT YOU LOVE ME ;~;

[sweetichigo227]

Free sex with kibum?! :O Yay! Though I really wish that Kibum would be a bit more playful and kind and thoughtful when he's with Kevin:( Poor Kevin:( I like the fluffy moments between too >_< They are so cute!

[s2_otter]

HAHA, don't worry much about that.
He's just reacting the way his body tells him to, but the resistance is dropping ^^
Thank you for liking and commenting! <3

[astraldreamz]

"“Missed me?” Kevin cheekily asked, lowering himself so their eyes were at the same level, locked."
O.o, seems like Kevin is slowly becoming more comfortable/at ease when he's around Kibum ^^. Story is getting somewhere~~~

" “Cruel. My heart is broken with your cruel, cruel words.”
“How do I fix it?” Kibum smiled tenderly"
LOL I died when I read this part~ They sound like a really sweet couple, although this is a costumer/seller relationship. Its funny how those 2 are just totally ignoring everyone else~ They never learn do they? Didn't the receptionist tell them not to scare away customers before? XP.

Its cute how innocent Kevin and Kibum are, even though they've done it a thousand times already... They get amused & attracted to the weirdest+simplest thing ever...

During their first time, Kevin was soo pessimistic about money... “But if you do want to have another round, you’d have to pay for another hour.” Now, he's practically begging Kibum to have another round with him~~ And even though Kevin was angry, I <3 how Kevin just

[s2_otter]

On an entirely different note, YES I MISSED YOU <3
Haha, you just disappeared ;~;
But yeah, he is getting used to Kibum's sometimes warm and sometimes cold attitude lol :D

^___^
She did, but aha, she can't do much :P

:DD
Because it's the simplest things that people misses~~ :P

HAHA, I didn't even fully realise that, although yes I was trying to show Kevin changed XD
^^

Nah, he was seriously asleep because the author was on the verge of sleeping on her laptop when she wrote it at about 12am-1am. She had drooping eyes and her father came knocking, saying she better go to sleep, and her inner self agrees, you know~?

Thanks for commenting ^^~

[astraldreamz]

LOL, the irony.. Although I quoted it, its funny how I started with "Missed me?"- Kevin. Sorry ;_; had finals.. Never thought you would notice D=<. But I would never disappear ~ *hardcore fan* .

Rofl, ahh poor Kibummie then, he changes according to his master? =O . jkjk. Aww, he wasn't asleep? Damn, I had this super awesome plot created in my mind too.

My own version:
Disclaimer: awful + non-serious +nonsensical writing ahead
Kibum was purposely trying to make Kevin mad.. Then he would go reserve Kevin for a day to cheer him up. Kibum takes him out to look at clouds~~~ And then they confess.. birds fly romantically by, swans swim by...... Then BOOM. fireworks. Then Kibum goes bury himself in a hole.. dying from embarrassment since he forgot that fireworks aren't really pretty in broad daylight. lalalallala happy ending.

Okay nvm, yeah. You see why I don't write? LOL . *goes wait for next Sunday instead*

Merry Christmas and have a happy new year. Hope you enjoyed your Christmas with your family (not at work)^^

[s2_otter]

Of course I would notice~
I notice a lot~ :D
^^ /cuddles

He WAS asleep lol.
Yes, his master is a very powerful...thing. LOL.

Aww, that's so cute, haha!
You should write! :3
Oh, yeah, I think you did say it's Sunday on your side XD
I keep forgeting about our time difference rofl.

MERRY CHRISTMAS (and a happy Kibum's birthday and a happy new year) <3 Yep, my last day of work was on Christmas Eve so yes! Haha, thank you~ <3