I usually hate broken!Kemaru fics, but today I was just feeling really blah and meh so I decided to read this.
I hate how you make me hate Eli lol. But it's okay cos it's just a fanfic hahaha. Sigh, if this were really to happen I just wish Kibum and Kevin don't see each other anymore. :'( THE PAIN IN THE HOUSEHOLD KILLS ME /stabs/
I don't know why I have a sudden urge to tell you I love you. Seeing this comment I just have a sudden urge to cry, and bawl and hug you. I've been feeling pissed for a while about two things and you just shot of one of them unknowingly. Thank you. <3
Thank you for reading this too, it means a lot to me <3
Eli...I would like to think he thought Kevin and Kibum broke up and were trying to hang on to the remnants of their relationship, trying to hasten the process himself. And yeah, the household is like ruined. That's what I was trying to convey, the pain before breaking up is knowing you're on your way there. Thanks for commenting, I swear I mean it.
Aww, haha don't cry bb /sends 100 packets of tissues/ You're welcome, for whatever I helped you shoot down. ^^;
You brought the dreariness and the pain of the household out really well, and this was a really good song to use. Except that it was on Kemaru /stabs self/ Hehe cheer up, it's like we're still suffering from the after-effects of the member change...... ):
Thank you, I'm glad I did, even though I didn't think I did. Was too busy imagining it really happening and then my Kemaru tears just kept falling while I wrote it. It's not really about the member change, but I guess it relates :(
This fic was beautifully written ~ Soo full of emotions ><""" I was debating whether I should read this or not because of the broken! Kibum/Kevin comment. At the end, I couldn't resist and read this anyway!~ I'm glad I read this
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You think so? Yay~ XD Yeah, I usually don't write broken!Kemaru cause that breaks my heart too, but this song is really nice! ;~;
Aw, thank you, I'm really glad you think so. Yeah, I thought so too, he rather depend on himself then the members :O Like he's a little disattached to the group now :S
Yeah, and they're both on the road to breaking up but just holding on to see who crumbles to the pain first :S
Alright then. Aha, no, my "mood" was because my friends gave me a visit while I was updating and we were talking ROFL. :) Of course I wouldn't hate you, /kisses I love you too much~ Thanks for commenting! ^^
"So they weren't even going to share a bed to lie to the walls that their hearts were still as one?" Aw I like this line, it's so... heartbreaking to read. Okay generally, this whole story is heartbreaking.
Come on, let me complete this story for you:
Snapping out of his confusion, Kibum ran after Kevin. Grabbing Kevin's wrist, Kibum turned him around and crashed their lips together, returning the gesture he had been too shocked to respond previously.
Kibum pulled away from the kiss as he wiped the tears that stained Kevin's flawless face.
"Stay." Kibum commanded, staring straight into Kevin's eyes.
Then fireworks exploded in the far distance, lighting up the once dull and lifeless sky with different shades of colours.
They got married afterwards and gave birth to 76 babies.
THE END.
HAHAHAHA isn't my ending awesome? ^u^
Don't sound so emo, I scared leh! Cheer up~ (Sends muffins made of love and rainbows)
Haha, you're so cute, seriously XD I was going to praise you for the beautiful ending when you made a crackfic ROFL. 76 babies? Isn't Kevin just fertile? ROFLROFLROFL.
But yeah, awesome, XD! <3 I'm better, no worries! :) /eats the muffins happily Thanks for commenting!
fsdjfdfs huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhhuhuhuhu!!! TT-TT My heart is breaking right now. I'm dead. I usually don't read Broken fics...because my imagination is so vivid, that I usually end up crying like a baby...But this was so fantastically written, and it seemed so real...and...Wow. <3 I need a hug now.
TT_TT i usually dont like broken!kemaru but since it is still kemaru~~~~ since the first paragraph....my heart cant take it ;_; probably because i can imagine it happening to kemaru for real~ and it is quite refreshing?? to read kevin as a jerk LOL and i have to say.....kevin seems to have changed (i guess that's the right word?)nowadays.....idk....just different~ but in anyway this was very well written <33 even if it is broken!kemaru i actually like it A LOT :))
Aha, sorry for breaking your heart :O Kevin wasn't being a full jerk :3 I mean, he has his conscience, but yeah XD! You're the second one to say Kevin has changed, astraldreams said that too up there, aha. Thank you for liking it and commenting! <3
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I hate how you make me hate Eli lol. But it's okay cos it's just a fanfic hahaha. Sigh, if this were really to happen I just wish Kibum and Kevin don't see each other anymore. :'( THE PAIN IN THE HOUSEHOLD KILLS ME /stabs/
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Seeing this comment I just have a sudden urge to cry, and bawl and hug you. I've been feeling pissed for a while about two things and you just shot of one of them unknowingly.
Thank you. <3
Thank you for reading this too, it means a lot to me <3
Eli...I would like to think he thought Kevin and Kibum broke up and were trying to hang on to the remnants of their relationship, trying to hasten the process himself.
And yeah, the household is like ruined.
That's what I was trying to convey, the pain before breaking up is knowing you're on your way there.
Thanks for commenting, I swear I mean it.
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You're welcome, for whatever I helped you shoot down. ^^;
You brought the dreariness and the pain of the household out really well, and this was a really good song to use. Except that it was on Kemaru /stabs self/
Hehe cheer up, it's like we're still suffering from the after-effects of the member change...... ):
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Thank you, I'm glad I did, even though I didn't think I did.
Was too busy imagining it really happening and then my Kemaru tears just kept falling while I wrote it.
It's not really about the member change, but I guess it relates :(
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Yeah, I usually don't write broken!Kemaru cause that breaks my heart too, but this song is really nice! ;~;
Aw, thank you, I'm really glad you think so.
Yeah, I thought so too, he rather depend on himself then the members :O
Like he's a little disattached to the group now :S
Yeah, and they're both on the road to breaking up but just holding on to see who crumbles to the pain first :S
Alright then.
Aha, no, my "mood" was because my friends gave me a visit while I was updating and we were talking ROFL.
:)
Of course I wouldn't hate you, /kisses
I love you too much~
Thanks for commenting! ^^
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This is a... depressing bedtime story LOL.
"So they weren't even going to share a bed to lie to the walls that their hearts were still as one?" Aw I like this line, it's so... heartbreaking to read. Okay generally, this whole story is heartbreaking.
Come on, let me complete this story for you:
Snapping out of his confusion, Kibum ran after Kevin. Grabbing Kevin's wrist, Kibum turned him around and crashed their lips together, returning the gesture he had been too shocked to respond previously.
Kibum pulled away from the kiss as he wiped the tears that stained Kevin's flawless face.
"Stay." Kibum commanded, staring straight into Kevin's eyes.
Then fireworks exploded in the far distance, lighting up the once dull and lifeless sky with different shades of colours.
They got married afterwards and gave birth to 76 babies.
THE END.
HAHAHAHA isn't my ending awesome? ^u^
Don't sound so emo, I scared leh! Cheer up~
(Sends muffins made of love and rainbows)
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I was going to praise you for the beautiful ending when you made a crackfic ROFL.
76 babies? Isn't Kevin just fertile? ROFLROFLROFL.
But yeah, awesome, XD!
<3
I'm better, no worries! :)
/eats the muffins happily
Thanks for commenting!
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Kevin has 52 wombs, that's why. ^u^
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Then he'll menstruate all year round 0.0?
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I need a hug now.
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There, better? :)
Thank you for liking it and commenting! /cuddles
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but since it is still kemaru~~~~
since the first paragraph....my heart cant take it ;_;
probably because i can imagine it happening to kemaru for real~
and it is quite refreshing?? to read kevin as a jerk LOL
and i have to say.....kevin seems to have changed (i guess that's the right word?)nowadays.....idk....just different~
but in anyway this was very well written <33
even if it is broken!kemaru i actually like it A LOT :))
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Kevin wasn't being a full jerk :3 I mean, he has his conscience, but yeah XD!
You're the second one to say Kevin has changed, astraldreams said that too up there, aha.
Thank you for liking it and commenting! <3
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