Now that I read it again, I lome it a lot better now xD actually I like it alot. But my words are not expressing it adequately... Mehh... All I can say is that at the end of reading this I sti get the same feeling as when I read it fir the first time, which is the wow~ feeling. Damn I really run out ways to express myself at 3plus in the morn ><
I get the idea of strobe lights you were trying to convey, but even without that idea, the entire story still comes out and flows (: the descriptions were really vivid so like every time you are describing the scenes, I have like a picture right smack in my head xD
I know, it is a "new" writing style cause I usually spam my fics with dialogues :S I do get what you're saying, don't doubt yourself XD I don't really like dialogues, but I don't know how to make fluffy fics fluffy if not for dialogues so yeah HAHA.
NO YOU DON'T <3! /bans you from saying such things! When you want to say self-degradatory (sp?) things, might as well tell me again that you love me, because I love you ^^
SPOT for eftsoon! Sweetie, my very first spot for the awesome you :D! Lalalalala, I miss your updates now :( When will you come back with works? It can be something other than your Nanowrimo? :D
Ahahaha, you like ukes that sometimes take control huh? Sort of hinted that in Parenting for Dummies first chapter XD. Obviously, Dongho's really pretty, anyway. :D
YES I DO /raises hand and salutes Haha, you might want to look at your challenge? Get inspired? I get inspired by the weirdest things lol. Maybe reading other people's challenge would help too ^^ PWP SMUT IS AMAZING, JSYK Ahaha, fighting!
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You saw this before, lol.
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I get the idea of strobe lights you were trying to convey, but even without that idea, the entire story still comes out and flows (: the descriptions were really vivid so like every time you are describing the scenes, I have like a picture right smack in my head xD
And yay for 2shin hehe
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Ahahha, that's okay? XD
Lolllll. Whoever told you to stay awake -.-"
Lollll BUT I NEED THAT IDEAAAAAA.
It's my prompt lol.
Lol seriously? But I don't think I really described a lot lol. But thanks anyway :)
Haha, yay for 2SHIN XDD
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Hello sweetie~! :DD! Ninja!Kemaru? :D
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I'm glad you like them, I did kind of too ^^
I know, it is a "new" writing style cause I usually spam my fics with dialogues :S I do get what you're saying, don't doubt yourself XD
I don't really like dialogues, but I don't know how to make fluffy fics fluffy if not for dialogues so yeah HAHA.
NO YOU DON'T <3!
/bans you from saying such things!
When you want to say self-degradatory (sp?) things, might as well tell me again that you love me, because I love you ^^
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Lalalalala, updating~! :D
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Sweetie, my very first spot for the awesome you :D!
Lalalalala, I miss your updates now :( When will you come back with works? It can be something other than your Nanowrimo? :D
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You want sequel? Lol, what kind? XD
Ahahaha, you like ukes that sometimes take control huh? Sort of hinted that in Parenting for Dummies first chapter XD. Obviously, Dongho's really pretty, anyway. :D
YES I DO /raises hand and salutes
Haha, you might want to look at your challenge? Get inspired? I get inspired by the weirdest things lol. Maybe reading other people's challenge would help too ^^
PWP SMUT IS AMAZING, JSYK
Ahaha, fighting!
♥!
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Ahahaha, you like the impression or the dance floor? XDD! It's a strong attraction :D Dongho has that power XD
Ahahaha. Wow, slight detachness makes the story sounds better XP
Haha, I love all your inputs, always so refreshing ^^ <3~
YES. DONGHO'S SHORT XDDDDDDD!
Lol, Kemaru invaded my life and never left. XD!
Thank you for the awesomely long comment~!
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