Skydiving 10/10 part 2

May 09, 2010 13:19

‘Errrrrrrr, Gwen I don’t feel so good’ Merlin said as he stumbled out of the bar, Arthur and Gwen supporting him.

‘I think that might have something to do with the celebratory Sambuca you downed while we weren’t looking’ Gwen said, half exasperated, half amused.

‘She still loves me’ he said, punching the air and missing Arthur’s nose by ( Read more... )

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ladylouk May 9 2010, 15:45:34 UTC
Yep I think it's a great chapter I really love the way you develop your characters and I love gwen and uther interaction.
And drunk Merlin is so priceless love him .
I love this fic I always enjoy reading it thankssssssss you so much for sharing. ;-)
I kiss and hugSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

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s11235 May 9 2010, 17:21:50 UTC
Thanks so much hun! Drunk Merlin is great fun to write.
You have been so good to me since I started writing these fics. Thank you so much for you unwavering support. It has meant a lot <3 <3 <3

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jjazz59 May 9 2010, 18:40:36 UTC
I've been watching and wait for the last chapter. I was not disappointed. This is a great ending to a fun story. Merlin, when he can't hold his liquor is very funny. I'm glad Uther accepted Arthur and Gwen. I look forward to reading more from you.

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s11235 May 9 2010, 19:51:29 UTC
Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting x

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mag2425 May 10 2010, 03:00:02 UTC
BB!!! I am so happy and so sad all at the same time.

I <3 you Vivian. She was just perfect. You got her characterazation down to a T. And oh how you read my mind. I was sooo hoping you would stick her on Lancelot. Wonderful!!

I <3 your Merlin. And drunk Merlin is just hilarious. You had me rolling on the floor laughing at his antics. So glad that Freya wants to work things out. :)

I <3the moments between Uther and Gwen. How she did not back down and how Uther is slowly gaining respect for her and how she remind him of Igraine. And he's coming over for dinner. Uther does have a heart. Well done bb!!

I <3Arthur and Gwen. I cannot begin to tell you how perfectly you right them. I love how they are both thinking about thier future together and all of Arthurs thoughts about their kids. It was really sweet and lovely ( ... )

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s11235 May 10 2010, 15:44:08 UTC
Thank you sooooo much! *smiles goofily* your comments are so lovely and I'm glad you felt I got Vivian's character alright. I was so worried I'd go totally overboard, because she really REALLY bugs me :P so I thought sticking her with lancelot was adequate punishment :P
Poor Merlin, I felt a little bit guilty because he was JUST a plot device in this chapter- bless him.
Glad you liked the uther/gwen interaction, this was one of the toughest parts for me. Getting to a point where he accepted it without being happy about it and I also find Uther's character really hard to get a handle on.
And of course I am very happy you like how I write a and g :D.
Thank you so much for your lovely compliments and support, you have been so great and I'm just glad you've enjoyed it :D
And there is plenty more a/g to come from me i assure you, I am totally addicted :P xx

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mag2425 May 12 2010, 02:12:08 UTC
LOL. I am addicted as well. I think we need some sort of support group AGA Arthur/Gwen Anonymous For all those totally addicted to Arwen!!!

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ella_rose88 May 10 2010, 07:33:10 UTC
WOW I have most certainly enjoyed this series so much.

You write AU very well.

My favourite parts (they were many of course)were:
-when Gwen stood up to Uther and Uther realising how much Gwen reminded him of Igraine. It was great that Uther came to accept A/G
- drunk Merlin OFMG!!! I also loved how he talked about them to the reporter and said that they were gonna get married and how A/G got all nervious (because they were thinking that too)
- and obviously I loved all the A/G moments and how they both admitted about thinking about the future.

Seriously you have to continue with this story (A/G getting married and having kids and all). not that I',m pressuring you or anything (LOL

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s11235 May 10 2010, 15:55:16 UTC
Thanks very much!
Lol and I may well continue via one-shots if I get the inspiration. Thanks for your lovely comments xx

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winwin7 May 10 2010, 12:54:49 UTC
That was a wonderful ending!
Enjoyed the fic from beginning to end.
Thanks for writing it ♥

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s11235 May 10 2010, 15:56:06 UTC
Thanks very much, glad you liked the ending (and the beginning :P)

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