Dreams for Plans part 7

[s11235]

‘Uther,’ Morgana said looking up from her plate, ‘I was wondering, if perhaps I could maybe, possibly, go on a pilgrimage to my father’s grave’

‘After what happened last time?’ Uther scoffed.

‘But I haven’t been to my father’s grave in over a year, it is not far-’

‘Far enough to be attacked by bandits’

‘But I would have guards with me and Gwen

Comments

[miki_hime1221]

No worries! It was beautiful! I always love it when Arthur suspects Merlin of liking Gwen when he clearly doesn't. It leads to awesome moments of jealousy. Your characterization was spot on! Great work!

[s11235]

Thanks so much! Jealous Arthur is fab, we need more of him on the show, soooooooooo want to have him find out about Gwen and Merlin's kiss back in s1, it would be brilliant.

[metym]

<3<3<3<3<3 this fict was AMAZING! you're very talented! i loved it

[s11235]

Thanks very much! Thank you so much for your all your reviews over the course of this fic, you are very kind and I am really glad you enjoyed it :D

[saurina]

It wasn't dissappointing at all bb, quite the contrary. It was so funny to see Arthur squirm when Merlin and Gwen had to pretent to be married. I love jealous Arthur, he becomes so adorable stupid when it comes to Gwen and other men.

And yay to Morgana finally outing them. Great chapter bb..:D

[s11235]

YAY for jealous Arthur (I think we need more of him on the show- though preferably not involving too much lancelot, would love to see him find out about Gwen kissing Merlin- it would be epic)
Thanks so much for your comments over this fic, you are very good to me :)

[saurina]

YAY for jealous Arthur (I think we need more of him on the show- though preferably not involving too much lancelot, would love to see him find out about Gwen kissing Merlin- it would be epic)

I couldn't agree more. I LOVE jealous Arthur, but I squirm every time Lancelots name is mentioned. Not that I don't like Santiago Cabrera - he's awesome, but the legend is weighing down on me, I don't want Gwen to cheat on Arthur *whines*, they are my OTP. So yeahh let us instead bring Merlin into the game, could be really fun to watch..:D

[s11235]

Totally agree- Santiago is VERY pretty, but if Lancelot insists on messing with the A/G love I will not be happy. The whole love triangle business is one of the few reasons that I really like the fact that Merlin is a family show (and on the bbc) - there is no chance of adultery. So Gwen will stick to her choice once she's made up her mind and tbh the only way that her cheating would even make sense would be for her to marry lancelot (because he's the easy choice) and then cheat with Arthur. But for me there is always that nagging concern of the legend.
Also I think it would be nice for us to see Arthur's reaction to the whole Merlin/Gwen business, because his jealousy and, I would guess, sulking would be totally unfounded. And i think that would be a nice change from arthur getting angsty over lancelot (I love angsty arthur, but I love jealous arthur more :P)
Sorry for the long rant/ramble :P

[sagacious_c]

I'm relieved Morgana didn't do anything too nasty -- a little teasing manipulation felt just right. Lovely ending. I wish the whole show could be the four of them...! You write all four of them really well. :)

[s11235]

I was tossing it up over whether to make her a bit meaner or not, and decided to go with this, glad you felt it worked. Yeah, we totally need more ot4 in the show, hoping next series has more of that, even if Morgana has got her evil on- the boys leave the girls behind far too much. Thanks for commenting :D

[javabreeze]

[s11235]

Thanks very much, I just hate it when I feel like a chapter is rushed and I haven't had much of a chance to check it.