That was really good. I liked how their conversation gently turned to flirting, Kazuki's confusion, the cigarette kissing, and the the (guh!)ending. I thoroughly enjoyed it and will now go to bed happy. Thank you! ^_^
...he wouldn’t really be surprised if he’d wake up dead one day... loved that. it's one of those that just stuck with me.
Aww, thank you. The cigarette thing is quite an overused plot-device for me but I guess it works particularly well with this fandom. Like I said, I've only watched 12 episodes so far and I'm glad I didn't make them too much OOC. Sweet dreams, then... *hugs*
*hugs back* Really? I'm afraid I wouldn't know too much about OOC-ness. I've seen the entire series, but that was over a year ago when I downloaded/watched the whole thing in one summer. Well, used like that, cigarettes are sexy no matter what my personal feelings are.
The series just started showing on a local channel about two weeks ago so I don't really know that much.
Oh, I don't smoke either but I do love writing about it (and I always have to cross my fingers that my portrayal of the act of smoking is, more or less, believable). Reminds me of a suicide fic I wrote when I was 15 and I got reviews that said "Oh my god, don't do that" or "Suicide isn't the answer, don't give up." Really amusing, that. ^_^
*melty* You have any idea how happy that just made me? My favorite pairing, that I've yet to find a writer for that I really like (*hisses at ff.net*), and I see this and I love it. <3 *waves BanKazu flag* If you ever need/want a beta-reader, I'd be glad to do it. ^___^ And I really do hope you do a sequel~
*giggles* Really? I've just discovered this fandom two weeks ago and fell in love with the Ban/Kazuki pairing... for some reason. Can't really explain why but, well, it just does it for me... And it was kinda sad (and frustrating) to see how there were just a few fics written for this pairing and only one or two that I found moderately decent. So I'm trying my hand a the pairing. I also posted this at ff.net, BTW. A beta reader? That'd be cool. Could I simply pluck your email add from your profile? I'm having ideas for a sequel but I'm currently working on a Halloween fic as of the moment so... ;)
I'm glad you liked it, really. Was really nervous, as I always am when entering into a new fandom...
I'm glad you like the pairing, it's so rare in this fandom, it seems. ^_^; *claps*
And yeah, I'd love to beta for any of your GB stuff. I like how you write. ^.^ My email addy (as I'm not sure if it's the right one in my profile) is silverstrings (at) gmail (dot) com. One of the paragraphs in this fic has inspired me to try and draw something for it... Let's see if it works. >.> *kicks artist's block*
hehe.. looks like another one in a long list of fandoms for you.. I don't really like the pairings.. you already know which ones I like but I'm not adverse to it.. anyway, great fic! really!!! you should REALLY write more.. and yeah a sequel would be great!
Well, you know me. I've always loved variety and I seldom go with canon so... Ang bad trip nga lang, onti lang ung reviews but whatever!
Gah! Don't remind me! I'd be wearing a fucking dress is three fucking days and it'd be all your fault!!! *grumbles* Hmph, kung di ka lang malakas skin, eh! ;)
Thank you! *sobs* You're so good to me! Few people read fanfics about a fandom they're not remotely familiar with. Wah! *glomptacklehugs you*
Ban and Kazuki are from Get Backers, an anime series. I could find some links for basic info for you, if you want. Anyway, here are their individual pics and one of the few pics of them together, in a hot spring no less. ^_^ Ban is the spiky haired one. Kazuki is the one with long hair.
I was reading anime porn??!! Bahahahahahaha!! *grins*
My friend once said that anime is good for nothing except cheap plot and porn. Don't know about the plot, but he got the porn part right ;-P
But, mmmm, I like Kazuki a lot :D
And the elf in my icon is Erestor, Elrond's Chief Advisor... so sexy, so intense, so smart... he so should have had a real part in the movie, even if he only said a few lines! *pouts*
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...he wouldn’t really be surprised if he’d wake up dead one day...
loved that. it's one of those that just stuck with me.
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Oh, I don't smoke either but I do love writing about it (and I always have to cross my fingers that my portrayal of the act of smoking is, more or less, believable). Reminds me of a suicide fic I wrote when I was 15 and I got reviews that said "Oh my god, don't do that" or "Suicide isn't the answer, don't give up." Really amusing, that. ^_^
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I'm glad you liked it, really. Was really nervous, as I always am when entering into a new fandom...
Oh, and *waves BanKazu flag with you* ♥
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And yeah, I'd love to beta for any of your GB stuff. I like how you write. ^.^ My email addy (as I'm not sure if it's the right one in my profile) is silverstrings (at) gmail (dot) com. One of the paragraphs in this fic has inspired me to try and draw something for it... Let's see if it works. >.> *kicks artist's block*
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Yay, then. It's quite difficult editing my own work. Having a beta reader is a welcome break. Thanks in advance.
Really? That's great! I've never seen a BanKazu fanart done before. I'd be waiting.
Is artist's block like writer's block? If so, *send you pocky*. Sugar always seems to do good for me. ;)
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ei, see you at my bday k? ^_^
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Gah! Don't remind me! I'd be wearing a fucking dress is three fucking days and it'd be all your fault!!! *grumbles* Hmph, kung di ka lang malakas skin, eh! ;)
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Ban and Kazuki are from Get Backers, an anime series. I could find some links for basic info for you, if you want. Anyway, here are their individual pics and one of the few pics of them together, in a hot spring no less. ^_^ Ban is the spiky haired one. Kazuki is the one with long hair.
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My friend once said that anime is good for nothing except cheap plot and porn. Don't know about the plot, but he got the porn part right ;-P
But, mmmm, I like Kazuki a lot :D
And the elf in my icon is Erestor, Elrond's Chief Advisor... so sexy, so intense, so smart... he so should have had a real part in the movie, even if he only said a few lines! *pouts*
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Ooh, Erestor. How could I have missed him? I agree... They should have given him a real part in the movie.
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